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While I was thinking about my past relationship,and the one now,I wrote this.And I hope we will keep the promise. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Oct 8, 2008    Reads: 37    Comments: 2    Likes: 2   


WOULD WE?

If you promise to just lay here,and forgett the world,

would you stay?

If I promise just to love you,and never let go,never ever.

Forever be.

Would I ?

And if we would say that we love each other so,

would we keep the promise?

To be together.

To never broke a heart.

Love,and nothing else.

Just be a happy couple.

That kept they'r promise,and had a realy love.

Would we?


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Comments:

Great job I liked this.It's another romantic one.Good job.

Posted: Oct 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Awww,thanks soooo much!Im so glad that you red so many of my poems.Thanks.
:)

ha! a question we all ask
just to know the answer at the end...
thats sweet
...x peace

Posted: Oct 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Lol,yea.Hahah.Thanks for stopping by,and reading.So much!!
:)



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