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FIRST LINES:
Rain is heavy,like
bullets its falling
on your dead body.
LAST LINES:
And you're lost in
darkness never finding
heart again.
You took a wrong way down. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Sep 20, 2008    Reads: 34    Comments: 2    Likes: 1   


WRONG WAY

Rain is heavy,like bullets

its falling.

On your dead body.

Exausted you are.From the

lies you said.

From the smiles you hate,

They killed you.

Empty heart that left the persons

who loved you.

Hurted soul from your mistakes.

You left them.

Him and him.

You said you love them.

You said you love them.

Noone ever leaved you.

Noone ever hurted you.

You broke they're hearts.

And yours too.

With lonelyness.

You used them.

Just to have someone.Who will love you.

And worry about you.Take care of you.

But now you have noone.

And its all your fault.

Thunder and lightning.

Hitting you from above.

You are done.

You spent your life.On what?

On nothing.

Now you fall down on the ground.

The dirt barryed you.

Noone remembers of you.

Lying down you rot.

Blood is now gone,eyes are all dry.

Your voice is lost from screams.

You caused.

And you're lost in darkness,

never finding light again.

You took a wrong way down.


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Comments:

Has that lost feeling

Posted: Sep 20, 2008

Author Comment:

Yea...I think we all sometimes do...I guess,lol..Thanks for reading.
:)

Wow..I could really feel all the emotion you put into this. A sad but very powerful poem. Great job. :]

Posted: Sep 20, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you so much for great comment!And I'm glad you liked it.
:)



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