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xxSong:SCREAMxx

Poem By: Dark Skylight
Young Adult


Song that I've wrote,lol.
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Submitted: Sep 27, 2008    Reads: 42    Comments: 3    Likes: 2   


SCREAM

IT STILL NEEDS SOME EDITING,LOL,BUT K...)

(music),its playing all the time,of course,lol,but I wrote it anyways.

Scream!(singer screams it)

Till you're cut in half.(quietly "talking")

Scream!(like in begining)

Till you're dead in ground.(quietly "talking")

Scream!(scream)

Till you are all mine.(Starts loud,ends quietly)

(small break)

...

Cry!(screaming)

Untill your eyes are dry.(fast and loud whisper)lol

Cry!(scream)

Untill your soul is gone.(Starts loud,ends quietly)

Cry!Cry!Cry!(screaming)

Till your death!

(small break).

...

Never you will find your dream.

Never you will be in peace.

Forever the darkness

will

HAUNT you.(raise your voice)

So better(very very quiet)

SCREAM!(Suddenly singer screams it)

Till you're cut in half.("normal" singing)

Till you're dead in ground.("normal"singing)

Scream!

Till you are all mine(fast,and quitly "whispers it)

CRY!

Untill your eyes are dry./"normal singing)

Untill your soul is gone.("normal"singing)

Cry!

Now everything's alright.(siger says it,not sings)

...

Horizont is coming up,

sky is burning down,

your voice resides.

Nothing you found.

(just music playing)

...

Will he ever come?

Will he ever gonna come?

Scream!(screaming)

Scream untill he hears.

Cry!(screaming)

Cry untill he sees.

That you love him.(quietly whispers)

...

Bleeding from your heart is

strong.("normal" singing)

Pledding in your mind is

wrong.("normal"singing)

Dont be scared.

Its alright.(Singer says it,not sings)

(small break)...

Your body wants to die,

but you're still alive.

You dont want it now.

So why dont you just

SCREAM!!!

Till everything's gone.(Signer says it sadly,and not sings it)



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Comments:

haha the scream parts remind me of tokio hotel's Scream XD
its quite good, i think it would make a great song, ilove these kind of lyrics [dark :D] and the way it is sung [screamorock] {at least thats how i heard it in my mind ^^}
nice one =]
xxx

Posted: Sep 27, 2008

Author Comment:

Lol,yea.It reminds of they're Scream a bit.Im glad you liked it.Thanks for reading!
:)

omg... luv screamo songs and i would fall in luv with this. luv ur creativity and choice of words. really nice!

Posted: Sep 27, 2008

Author Comment:

Aww,thanks so much!It means a lot to me.I'm very glad that you liked this song.Thank you again.
:)

That was very touching, Scream until it happens. That is a beautiful song. Thanks for writing such great lyrics and sticking with a pretty song.

Posted: Sep 27, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you.Yes,scream until it happens.Great said.Im glad you liked my song.I like it too.Thanks again for reading and everything.
:)



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