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Poem By: elegantbleeding
Young Adult


Written for Zeke; or rather, as a reply to a poem he once wrote me. Needless to say, he'll always be important to me, despite all the crap we've put each other through (even from extreme distances). View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Apr 23, 2008    Reads: 26    Comments: 1    Likes: 0   


…And anything I said would be understated
Like the way my mind is sedated,
Vindictive—yet vindicated.
Haven’t heard your voice yet, but I already love the way you talk.
If your love so fits with mine,
Then we’ve rehearsed our meeting a million times
Until it’s redundancy matches this absurd rhyme.
And we just keep singing.

[sweet, low tone harmony
filling in the gaps…
interrupted melody comes to a screeching halt.]

Fate is the master tormentor, dangling in my face
Day after day after goddamn day…
Makes it so hard to find the words to say.
If I had things my way,
I’d wake up with you to my left
And the morning would be dark, but your eyes would be bright with sunshine.
[…If you were mine…
Impossibly dreaming, at least one more time.]


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Comments:

Could feel that plodding

Posted: Apr 24, 2008

Author Comment:

I have to be honest... I'm not at all sure what you mean by that. It has been a long day, though. *shrugs*



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