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The Perception of Home

Poem By: elegantbleeding
Young Adult


Your perception changes a lot as you get older. That would be the theme of this one, folks. This is actually a little old... I wrote it in February and for whatever reason, it never got published on here. So here you go. I think it's worth a read. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Mar 26, 2007    Reads: 53    Comments: 5    Likes: 0   


Home is the best place a girl could be.

Yes, home is all that's protecting me.

My family is there to comfort my every thought and fear,

Saying "Don't worry child because we're all right here."

 

 

Home is where I can hide away.
Yes, home seems like a rather nice place to stay.
All the things that make me cry cannot reach me inside,
No matter how hard they may try.

 

Home is getting really strange these days.
Yes, home is an awkward place to stay.
Mom and Dad are arguing and they think I cannot hear.
I wish I could catch my mother's tears.

 

Home is getting worse as Christmas comes.

At home, the trouble has just begun.
Now Mommy wants to run away to find a brand new love.

We could use some help from above.

 

Home has become one tense place to live.

At home, Dad tries his hardest to forgive,
But anger takes control of every emotion that he owns.

My God, I just feel so alone.

 

Home is now a vacant space to me.
No, home is not a gleeful place to be.

I have become scared of what goes on behind closed doors.

There just has to be something more.

 

Home is not the place I want to stay.
Dear home, I fear I must now run away.
I'll walk to my old friend's house that lives almost a mile away.

Hopefully she will let me stay.

 

At home, I find myself in pools of tears.
Nowhere to go, but I surely can't stay here.

Overdramatic system made my best friends turn their cheeks.

My future's surely looking meek.

 

Home, I'm begging you today—

Make Mom and Dad put their cruelties away.
God, how I miss those good old days where I found comfort here.

Now it just simply isn't near.

Yes, I have everything to fear.


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Comments:

That's very sad and moving. It's also accurate, although I find that I'm twenty-one living somewhere else and I'm now nostalgic for the home I grew up in. I like it, but I sincerely hope you didn't draw too much on your own life for this one.

Posted: Mar 27, 2007

Author Comment:

Perhaps I did dramatize it somewhat, but the idea is based on my parent' near divorce two years ago. Things have been rocky since, but just so you know, they have gotten better. I was just reflecting.

A very sad poem, exceptionally well written. I also hope it isn't from your lifes experiences.

You might like to read "Your Perfect Life" it may give you a better idea of why things do go wrong.

Posted: Mar 27, 2007

Author Comment:

I might. Thank you for your response, I appreciate the input.

Wonderfully written elegantbleeding. Very sad and too true for too many.

Posted: Mar 27, 2007

Author Comment:

I agree. It's inevitable, though. It's just the way things have wound up, and there's nothing anyone can do except try to decide that it won't happen to them. All they can do is try, though. That's pretty indefinite.

very sad, but what is even more sad is just how true it is for most people, I see real talent here. it is good that you find an outlet in writing, it's very healthy compared to most other ways

Posted: Mar 31, 2007

Author Comment:

Haha, I hear that. I've tried a few of the other ways... Not nearly as satisfying, and you hurt a lot of people. Not to say I haven't hurt people with what I write; that's also common. But this is the best way I've found. Thank you for the encouragement.

.., lesson of life bring us clues as to what we WON'T be in the future. This may help you make your own house what YOU want...nice writing...

Posted: Jun 10, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you for your kind words, Thom.



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