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This is Me, Wishing You Were Here pt. 1

Poem By: elegantbleeding
Young Adult


This was the first poem I ever got published. At the time, I thought it meant something. Now I'm not sure, but I felt like it was significant enough to post. Not to mention, part II makes no sense without it. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Apr 20, 2007    Reads: 43    Comments: 0    Likes: 0   


 

Little pieces of you everywhere
Like to follow me around when you're gone.
I guess it's going to sound pretty weird,
But they're all stalking me
Like they want me to remember, that I can't get to you.
And if you're thinking about me,
You're on my mind too.
I miss you.

That picture I have of us
Loves to watch me while you're gone.
This is going to make me sound paranoid,
But it seems like you're staring at me,
Like your eyes in the picture are watching my moves.
I hope you're thinking about me,
Because I can't stop thinking about you.
I miss you.


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