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Summertime Love

Poem By: ixluvx2xwritex2
Young Adult


This is another one of the poems I wrote for College Fiction class. It was inspired by the death of one of my classmates over the summer. He was killed in a rollover accident not far from his home. I hope you like it!

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Submitted: Jan 3, 2008    Reads: 86    Comments: 6    Likes: 2   


The earth is especially beautiful
in the summer
we both swam and rode bikes
the trees were full and green.
 
Running through the fields
playing behind the barn
one very wet, rainy night
changed all that.
 
We were both driving too fast
the car swerved on the gravel
I yelled and tried to
grab the wheel from you.
 
The car came to a stop in a cornfield
I heard you calling my name
but we couldn’t find each other
I watched as the ambulance carried me away.
 
My family will remember who I was.
You will be tortured,
but do not fret
for, I forgive you.
 
I miss you up here
as much as you miss me
but I know that one day
we will see each other again.
 
God knows when we will meet
until then, I will watch over you
to make sure you don’t ever
drink and drive again


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Some real truths of cars and drinking. NOTHING LIKE THE FRONT PORCH

Posted: Jan 3, 2008

Author Comment:

What?

Very good write ......... Juliet

Posted: Jan 4, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks!

Touching and beautiful.

Posted: Jan 8, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks.

nice poem, it tells a lot of truth!! Ryan

Posted: Apr 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks. I wrote it for an AP Enlish class. What really inspired it was the tragic death of one of my elementary school friends. It was supposed to be a Billy Collins (if you know who he is) poem, but it kind of went it's own way! I'm really glad you enjoyed it!

Beautiful in a very sad way. It is very well written
~Kaori

Posted: Apr 14, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks. Once again, it's one I wrote for school. The inparation came from this summer when I had a classmate die. Thanks for the comment!

OH GOD it brought so many tears in my eyes....this is indeed sad for both of them....the one who survived would never be able to forgive himself....and the ONE who lost the life before time is also suffering....and wanting to come down and share her life with her love...her unfulfilled desires is painful too...

My uncle's son died like this....my husband broke his arm in one such trip with a drunken friend driving...
And i know so many such cases from Emergency dept and promised myself never never to be a surgeon and see young patients dying....JUST LIKE THAT...

Posted: Sep 5, 2008

Author Comment:

Oh I'm so sorry. I'm glad that, once again, this poem spoke to you. It really means a lot to me because I had a friend die in a drunk driving accident. I'm so glad you liked it!



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