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This is yet another poem that I wrote for Creative Writing class. It's based off of the 'Night Before Christmas' book. Hope you enjoy! View table of contents...
Submitted: Feb 12, 2008 Reads: 104 Comments: 6 Likes: 5
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WOW! What a great piece. You are a really good writer!!!
I loved the rhythm and the choice of words was very well done. Great job, i'll remember this poem :D
Posted: Mar 2, 2008
This is so cute! I bet you got a really good grade on it. Love it!
Posted: Mar 12, 2008
I LIKE IT!!! *and I don't say that very often* It's really good and funny. I wonder where they are running off to. . . .Anyway Its really well written.
~Kaori
Posted: Apr 14, 2008
i love rhyming poems like this with humour in them. it reminds my of Betjeman, a very funny English poet. Great writing!!
Posted: Apr 27, 2008
Haha...this was funny, it flowed really well, and I loved it!! You write very well...I added one of your novels to my reading list, and I'll be sure to get around to it soon!!:D
Posted: Jun 11, 2008
it is such a clever poem...to the PROM ....
lovely ending...and i would say an obedient girl and NOT a rebel since she promised to come back...
lovely lovelier loveliest....
Posted: Sep 5, 2008
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