Photo Album
Empty, yet unaware
Of longing memories yet to come
The children acknowledge their liberty
And the sands of time melt away in an empty room
Where a once chronic women once lived
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Photo Album of the Ages
Poem By: jfm98
Young Adult
This is from Alice's challenge! My very 1st, and not last, challenge! View table of contents...
Submitted: Jun 25, 2008 Reads: 54 Comments: 6 Likes: 5
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"and the sands of time melt away in an empty room"
- that was my favorite line ^^
great poem! it was short, simple, and sweet :) though kinda sad that the photo album is empty with memories that have yet to come *sigh* but in a way, it reminds me of love. love is an empty photo album waiting to be filled with memories. loooook! you have written a metaphor into your poem and i bet you didnt even know it! hahaha :D
keep up the great work ^^
Posted: Jun 25, 2008
empty.why? come let us fill it up together with happy happy memories.
Posted: Jun 25, 2008
hi! jfm. memories indeed melt the time frame for everything seems, to've happened just yesterday. our mind is a photo album. fill up this empty room (album) with many more children and women. good luck. lol. ;-)
Posted: Jun 26, 2008
i like this!, you should do a longer version. i think it would be brilliant
Posted: Jul 22, 2008
now this is my kind of poetry . i loved it .
terry
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i will look in again if ok with you .
Posted: Jul 28, 2008
that ROX!
Posted: Aug 23, 2008
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