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"Darling,It will be alright"

Poem By: Kritika
Young Adult


i just don't know why i am obsessed with tears! View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jun 27, 2008    Reads: 97    Comments: 15    Likes: 11   


Tear drops fall from your blue eyes
and my heart stops a beat at their sight.
I pull you close to me,
try to take the pain from you,
make it my own.
My cheek lays against yours
and your tears burn my face
as I whisper,
"Darling, it will be all right."

My tears blend with your own,
your pain now mine,
and our tears become one
as they fall in rivers on the sheets.

I dry your tears with kisses,
soft upon your face,
shelter you from pain
in the recesses of my love.
Our bed becomes a chalice
and we drink in each others sorrow,
finding salvation in each other's arms;
pain washed away giving rise to passion
'till we forget there ever were tears.


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Comments:

ERIC
(not registered user)

I have blue eyes, this is nice.

Posted: Jun 27, 2008

Author Comment:

i dunno why but i like blue eyes--i guess coz they remind me of water:oceans seas n stuff

and brown eyes too--i think they because i lUUUUUUUVVVVV chocolates!? ^.^ haha!!
anyways i'm glad that you liked it!

omg
this is like so touching and beautiful.
:]
LOved it!!!!

Posted: Jun 27, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you *BOWS HUMBLY*.........i'm glad that you liked my humble offering dear!!!!! =D

hi! kritika. u turn pain into pleasure highlighting togetherness in this poem. an enjoyable read. lol. ;-)

Posted: Jun 27, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you for such a sweet comment bubbly!!!

i guess having someon to share your pain makes it bearable!

I like this, is so touching and beautiful:)
"I dry your tears with kisses" I like this line it's so romantic.

Posted: Jun 27, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you raya..........and uummm i guess i'm turning into a romantic poet!!

hahaha!!

xoxololxoxox

~Kritika

The ultimate in romance, tears and pain alleviated by love and warmth. Love it!

Posted: Jun 27, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you for you comment anne!

xoxoxoxoLOLxoxoxoxo

~Kritika

warm poem.. leaves some of us wishing we had someone wiping our tears..

Posted: Jun 28, 2008

Author Comment:

there's no need to seculate whether you have someone to wipe your tears because GOD has sent someone for everyone!!

lol

ah, yes...love conquers all. Very romantic and so passionate. Your tears spill from the page, as well as your heart. So good. And yes sometimes tears are all we have, but if we didn't feel, we would have nothing.

Posted: Jun 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you for such a sweet comment!!!

And yes it is true.........if we din't feel........we are as good as dead.

LOl
=]

Aww this is really wonderful,and it's so nice when someone's helping you trough the hard moments...You wrote one beautiful poem,as always. :)

Posted: Jun 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you for your sweet comments......

Gr8 read..wondefully written!! If everytime,everyone managed to read or write such a poem while consoling sumone...the world be a happier place!! it brings out happy emotions... :-)

Posted: Jun 29, 2008

Author Comment:

yes............happiness would be much easier to gain if we were more sensitive to other peoples needs too!!

thanks for the sweet comments Animesh!

A very lovely piece. The colors are perfect (what other color could you possibly use?); and it was a breath of fresh air. Knowing that your tears are not alone.

MA

Posted: Jun 29, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you!!

And well i guess i like colours and yes they were perfect for this piece!!

hahaha!

LOL
~Kritika

loved it!!! good job:)...and please do read my poems and let me know if you like it ;)

Posted: Jul 1, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you nuttyz..............and i would love to check out your poems ASAP

~kritika

this is such a cute poem...very very few r lucky to have a friend like this poem ....and i pray to GOD to send many such friends in ur life...

Posted: Jul 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you di!!

ANd even I hope I have more friends like these...........like you!!

This was good :) i liked it. This poem just made me say AAAWWW. But i liked the emotion in this it was very passionate. Great job!:)

Posted: Jul 25, 2008

Author Comment:

hehe.....youre the first one who used the word "passionate" and i'm glad that you did!

LOL

~Kritika

omg !
i love it this is the best:)
going to read more of your stuff

Posted: Jul 28, 2008

Author Comment:

I'm g;lad that you liked it!

LOL

~Kritika

Darn good poem - congrats!

Posted: Aug 6, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks a lot tom!!



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