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I will always love you...

Poem By: Kritika
Young Adult


Dunno why i turned up with this ............that too at 5 in the morning! View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jun 22, 2008    Reads: 128    Comments: 16    Likes: 10   


The pain gets worse everytime i see his face,
yet the look in his eyes tells me it will be ok.
Another day,
just one more tear will fall,
just as long as i know we will never fall.
My heart echs with sadness,
i wish i could get past this.
The darkness isnt faiding.
I will never find a love like you,
where ill do anything like i did for you!!
I think of my future,
and his smile right next to mine,
I cant get the memories that that me and you both had,
I CANT
I WONT, let this hurt me now
I NEED to break out!!
Belive me now and you will see,
that LOVE is real and not just another
FAIRY TALE..

Why did you stop loving me??
Why dont you need me now??
I know you will see that we're meant to be,
when you walk past me,
you can see the way i feel,
with out my words to spare!!

NOW!! show me a reason,
tell me the tale,
and ill wonder why,
your not HERE!!
LOVE IS COMPLICATING
this i know,
so before you say NO,
i just want you to know
I WILL ALWAYS LOVE YOU ....


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Comments:

wow.
there's a lot of power in that poem
and you thought of it at 5 in the morning!!!!
but anywayssssss.
I realllyyy loved it!!!!

Posted: Jun 23, 2008

Author Comment:

thanx.........im really glad that you liked it =D

n oh well yea!!it was quite annoying because i never wake up at 5 in morning except when we have to go somewhere...........nopes.......infact i sleep like a log!! ^-^

but that day was weird.......u know like.........not only did i wake up early but that too with THIS in my mind!!

hah!sorry to annoy you with all that..........


anyways.........thanx for taking out some time to read and comment!!!

omg!x!..
its like jumping out the screen at me!x!..
i can literally feel the passion in your words!x!..
i love the intensity..
and the language is soo simple.. you can really relate to it..
xoxoxoxo

ps:~.. i feel so great ryt now.. look at me poem critic extrodinaire..
xlolx..

pps.. i updated mii novel if yooh wnt 2 take a look hun!x!..
xoxoxox

Posted: Jun 23, 2008

Author Comment:

thanx a billion times over!!!

*running off to read your novel*


pretty powerful!! I likd it!!! well done~

Posted: Jun 23, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you soooooooo much!!

im really glad you liked it~

Awwww,sooo beautiful,sweet.I likeit.You write great poem! :)

Posted: Jun 23, 2008

Author Comment:

:) thnx a lot!!!!!!!!

*HUGS TIGHTLY* and oh! im so happy that you think i write good poems ^-^!!

hi! kritika. a loving heart'll always be cheered. deep love can evoke such powerful words. good work. lol. ;-)

Posted: Jun 23, 2008

Author Comment:

*SMILES SHEEPISHLY*..........thank you bubbly for your encouraging words and i completely agree with you ..............but i guess im a weirdo because i wrote this poem even though i have NEVER been in LOVE!!!!!!!!!!

^-^

lol

I really liked it :)

Posted: Jun 23, 2008

Author Comment:

*blows kisses*...............thank you!!

i like it 2 ^^

strong and really power full..
i think it will get the messege through to him

...
x

Posted: Jun 24, 2008

Author Comment:

:D

hah! yes you are right .........it SHOULD get the message across !!

A powerful and emotion packed poem.....LOVELY.....This makes lots of sense and touches heart and soul....

Posted: Jun 24, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you pratibha!!

smile
(not registered user)

fery sweet so sad.i almost startet crying.realy nice. keep up the good work

Posted: Jun 25, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you soooooooo much!

*PAts smile comfortingly* dont cry!! =]

Amazingly intense and thoughtful...anyone reading it can practically feel wat ur feeling...thts how truthful and heatfelt it is....Gr8 work!! Wld be gr8 if u cld chk out my work and honestly comment on it...

Posted: Jun 26, 2008

Author Comment:

i'm really glad that you liked it......thnx a ton!!

and dont worry i honestly give honest opinions!!! :D

sorry..i meant heartfelt...in my prev comment...

Posted: Jun 26, 2008

Author Comment:

lol

i had already got that!!

that was so powerfull...it's makes me think of some of things ive been through in my life...You have written a great poem this will definatly touch the heart and souls of poeple across the globe you have a gift and don't be afraid to let it show....and if this was written at 5am you must be brave to stay up that early lol

Great Stuff!
Da Iawn

Posted: Jun 26, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you for your insightful comments james!!

And well talking about brave.......you are right! ^.~ i was studying for my exams and wrote this in my "break time" lol!!!
and uhm! i dont know what's THANK YOU in welsh but Thanks a LOT again!

lol

~Kritika

a lovely, sweet, sad poem! Great writing!!

Posted: Jul 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you matthew..........i guess i kinda LIKE being sad! atleast when it comes to my poems......i'm NOT at all like this in real life though!

i read this again because i think this is one of ur best poems honey

Posted: Jul 18, 2008

Author Comment:

OMG!!!!! you really think so di?!

I'm SO glad that you do!! ^-^

LOL

~Kritika

I have felt this one many a time in my life-great writing skills and free expression-xxX

Posted: Jul 19, 2008

Author Comment:

that's new!

i havent seen a girl asking a boy if he could write ......but considering that you are a creative person i guess you WOULD ask for this quality!!

LOL

WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW !
THIS IS VERY VERY GOOD.

Posted: Jul 28, 2008

Author Comment:

=D

LOL

~Kritika



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