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how exactly do you define a friend?
How do you find that special person out of the crowd???
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Submitted: Jul 1, 2008 Reads: 81 Comments: 10 Likes: 4
A friend is like a flower
a rose to be exact.
Or maybe like a brand new gate
that never comes unlatched
A friend is like an owl
both beautiful and wise
Or perhaps a friend is like a ghost
whose spirit never dies
A friend is like a heart that goes along till the end
WHere would we be in this world
if we didn't have a friend?!
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This is one greeeeat poem!Yes,where would we be if we wouldnt have friend.I guess in the dark.(jk)...
I like this poem too,lol.Well all of your poems are really great. :)
Posted: Jul 1, 2008
haha I liked it alot
Posted: Jul 1, 2008
This is so sweet..it's kind of a scary thought, to not have a friend..very good job. :)
Posted: Jul 1, 2008
I like how you capture the multiple types of friends out there in this piece. You have your doctor Phil friends. You may have you crazy Tom Cruise friends jumping on couches. lol I might have misspelled his last name go me. I could give more examples that should do though for now. Enjoyed this a bunch.
Posted: Jul 1, 2008
Owl is a good comparison but can be done like 'it is vigilant and awake when u sleep off' and a good friend takes care of u even when u r unaware....
lovely comparisons and very different....
by the way ENGINEERING is a great career....
Posted: Jul 1, 2008
yup..friends can be ghosts sometimes!
Posted: Jul 1, 2008
I agree with pratibha on the comparison part....but besides tht,its gr8...where would any of us be without our friends!!
Posted: Jul 1, 2008
yes.. i guess thats what a friend is ..
great poem..
i especially like the last two lines...
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x
Posted: Jul 2, 2008
its really sweet! nice!
Posted: Jul 2, 2008
awww cute poem! I loved it :)
Posted: Jul 7, 2008
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