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You are my life...

Poem By: Kritika
Young Adult


Tags: love, obsessed, pain, time, life

obsessed with love........ View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jul 1, 2008    Reads: 86    Comments: 11    Likes: 6   


I want to hold your hands and walk a mile
dont want to miss you,even a while

My life is so beautiful coz
Dear,it's you.......MY LIFE

Hug me for my worries to die
my tears to dry
and my loneliness to fly

It hurts me to know
how I sometimes can be a little selfish
when it comes to you

I am getting sentimental on you!
For god's sake explain why?!

I miss you every moment of the day
I keep myself awake just to listen to you
I keep myself empty just for you to fill
I keep myself alive just to see you

My mornings miss you
my evenings seek you
where were you all these years?
why you weren't there to wipe my tears?!

Fear of future is worst than the pain of past
still I bother the least coz you are there

even seconds are too long to miss you
I want to hold your hands and walk a mile
dont want to miss you,even a while


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Comments:

Aww this is so sweet and beautiful.Really really beautiful. :)

Posted: Jul 1, 2008

Author Comment:

tahnk you........... thank you


LOL

~kritika

really really sweet

Posted: Jul 1, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks you so much Kirsten!!

ohhhhhhh, this really shows true love!
~Lemon

Posted: Jul 1, 2008

Author Comment:

yes it does ..........kinda obssessive ain't it??

too sweet!

Posted: Jul 1, 2008

Author Comment:

OMG!! thanks........*wipes tears*

really sweet...
gotta add to my reading list!!!

.


.x

Posted: Jul 2, 2008

Author Comment:

aww... thanks a lot an0nym0us!

I wonder how much more beautiful ur poems would be when ur Prince would enter in ur life...

All ur poems on LOVE sound as if you are 'feeling' them...from ur heart and soul....lovely

Posted: Jul 18, 2008

Author Comment:

He he!

THAT's something even I have wondered!




awww i loved it,it was so sweet:D

Posted: Jul 28, 2008

Author Comment:

:D

LOL

~Kritika

Luvved it!!Very honest thoughts...love,really,is an obsession and ur poem proves it. :-)

Posted: Jul 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Hehe!!

Yes......and love is becoming more of an obsession nowadays!

~Kritika

Good Poem And Very Touching. I Really Liked It. Good Job.

Posted: Jul 30, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you so much viper...

O my gosh, this poem was absolutely beautiful, and I felt such a strong connection to it. Simply beautiful in every way, and I know just how it feel. I love it! :)

Posted: Aug 1, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks you soooooooooo much!

i loved it....it made me think of somebody.:)

Posted: Sep 16, 2008

Author Comment:

im glad....and thanks for reading



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