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You are the friend i always wanted....

Poem By: Kritika
Young Adult


for my best friend and someon who was always there for me..... View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jul 1, 2008    Reads: 56    Comments: 8    Likes: 5   


Someone to lean on
Someone to love
with arms wide open
you offer a hug

Someone to cry with
laugh with and smile
someone to make
every moment worthwhile

When times get rough
and my world falls apart
Youre someone i run to
you offer your heart

from tearful shoulders
to stomach-aching laughs
you're someone i need
And someone everyone should have

You're someone who can always
show me the brighter side
and i can always tell you
what i feel inside

Someone to be thankful for
someone never to forget
you're someone special i'll always love
You're the best friend I've ever met


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Comments:

Sooooooooooooooooooooo wonderful!I love this.Really wonderful and sweeet poem! :)

Posted: Jul 1, 2008

Author Comment:

thnks a lot dear!!

LOL

~kritika

kritika,
Is that wat u think abt me? *sob*
U made me cry stupid! Thanks for this lovely poem. Rock on. I wish i could do something like this to tell u how important u r in my life. But thats u, nd I can never do this great a thing. U r an amazing person..
loving nd missing u loads,
Ur best mate,
Shishir :-)

Posted: Jul 1, 2008

Author Comment:

awwwwwwwwww..........*cries silently*........i'm really happy that you liked it...........and don't worry i know how amazing i am!! ;-)........LOL

~Kritika

n i'm missing u too!

awwwww that is sooooo cute

Posted: Jul 1, 2008

Author Comment:

hehehehe..........really?!

i'm glad!!

this is really good! shows what having a best friend is like!
~Lemon

Posted: Jul 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks a bunch Alex........i'm glad that you liked it!

LOL

~Kritika

awww...*wipes tears*

Posted: Jul 1, 2008

Author Comment:

*passes the tissue paper*...........thanks!!

wow.. i like it...
i do have a best-friend like that too
a person whose always there for u when u need themm..

..
!!!

.
x

Posted: Jul 2, 2008

Author Comment:

lucky you!!
everyone needs someone special and that special can be a friend too!!

LOL

I absolutely love this.
:) makes me appreciate my friends so much more.

Posted: Jul 12, 2008

Author Comment:

I'm glad that you liked it........And you MUST appreciate your friends and respect the fact that they love you!!

LOL


~KRitika

GOD bless both of you honey....

Posted: Jul 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks di!!



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