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Falling is Falling

Poem By: Lacey Evans
Young Adult


This is a poem about love and the good and bad effects. Probably not for young children. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Apr 29, 2008    Reads: 46    Comments: 3    Likes: 1   


When you fall you fall

Just remember that

Love takes you away

HIgh in the sky

Only to drop you and laugh.

Because a fall is a fall

Don't let it catch you

Unless you're on your toes

The first time,

You scrape your knees,

Bruise here

And there

But not me

I fell, and I fell hard

Knocked down and

Cut into

With the thorns of this "love"

No, love is not all you need

Listen to this

I ask you please

For when you fall you fall

So pick yourself up, and be

Strong


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Comments:

wow for a first poem here, this is very good indeed. keep writing =)

Posted: Apr 29, 2008

Great poem!!!! ;-)

Posted: Apr 29, 2008

Just like the trap SNAPPING on the mouse

Posted: Apr 29, 2008



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