her lies cant ruin us

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Poem By: lies of my secret life
Young Adult

well this girl is trying to steal my guy
so of course i was mad but i was upset at what she was saying...
so one night i wrote this to let it all out. Now I laugh at her b/c she is ridiculous and jelouse b/c she isnt with him =] View table of contents...

Submitted: Aug 28, 2008 Reads: 25 Comments: 3 Likes: 2

Rumors cut deep

like a knife through my heart.

Especially the ones,

that could tear us apart.

My love for you runs so true,

it hurts me to hear,

what I have,

and always will fear.

She goes around saying,

You really like her.

Don’t you still love me?

I’m no longer sure.

She tells the stories.

Lies, I pray they will be.

But, I don’t know,

and I’ll just have to wait and see.

She wants to steal you,

to take you away.

But in the mean time,

made our relationship her prey.

But if a war is what she wants,

I’m ready for a fight.

Let the battle rage on,

let her feel my might.

I fight for what I love,

and I thought you should know,

that I LOVE YOU!!

Even if sometimes it doesn’t show.

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Comments:

Marathongman

I like it alot

Posted: Aug 28, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you

Marathongman

I like it alot

Posted: Aug 28, 2008

Itsuwari

Good piece. Good structure and rhyme and it flows very well. But I think its strongest aspect is how very relateable it is. The emotion, the feeling, the power. We have almost all been there, and you captured it perfectly. Brilliantly done.

Posted: Aug 28, 2008