Am I Worthless?

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Poem By: Lost
Young Adult

Tags: hate

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Submitted: Jul 20, 2008 Reads: 56 Comments: 1 Likes: 1

I Know He Hears Me

But Why Won't He Look At Me

I Call Out His Name

And He Still Doesn't Look At Me

I Run Up And Hug Him

And

He Just Pushes Me Away

And Says That I'm Worthless

That I Shouldn't Even Be Living

I Look At Him And Start Crying

He Just Looked At Me And Started To Walk Away

I Ran To Him And He Hit Me With As Much Force As He COuld

Now I Lay On That Cold Forrest Floor

And

Wonder What Did I Do To Make Him So Mad At Me

To Make Him Hate Me

And So There I Lay On That Cold Forrest Floor

And Cry Endless Tears

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Comments:

Lost:

Well written! Most sad theme of rejection and despair. Think that the word "forrest", as you use it should be spelled "forest". Just a thought.

Gave it an "I Like It" vote.

If you have not done so already, please read and rate some of my own postings entitled:

1. "Excitement Inspired....",

2. "Our Grampa Ed",

3. "Love Intended" #1, #2 & #3",

4. "Limerick For Life",

5. "Self Love",

6. "POEMS",

7. "Here To Stay",

8. "Katie Anne" &

9. "Emma Lee".

Thank you!

Happier trails,

Ed Bradley.