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Do You Even Care About Me?

Poem By: Lost
Young Adult


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Submitted: Jul 20, 2008    Reads: 38    Comments: 2    Likes: 0   


i wait for you

and you never show up

i call you

and you never answer

i leave you messages

and you never call back

i want to hang out

and you never come

when im mad

 you tell me to get over it

i want to hang out and you tell me your busy

i ask

"Do you even care about me?"

and he said "no"


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Comments:

wow i like the poem it's really good

Posted: Aug 6, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks

aw...short and sweet...how many times has this happened to us girls? lol :)

good job

Posted: Nov 25, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks. Lol.



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