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i love you....

Poetry By: Mary Jo
Young adult

its about a love that saved a life and gained a life

Submitted:Aug 9, 2011    Reads: 28    Comments: 10    Likes: 5   

i love you

the was with her

she was beautiful

beyond compare

from her blond hair

to her blue eyes

she is perfect

and so are you

a match made in heaven


have wavy brown hair

grey eyes

and could never match

a descendent

from Aphrodite herself

i was normal

yet the day

that life itself

was leaving me

you left her

to come to my side

you said

' i will die before the'

you gave your life

they took yours instead

when i saw your pale body

i drooped to my knees

i lifted your head

'you can't say goodbye'

i whispered

'you have yet to say hello'

his eyes opened


he said

he took me in his arms

tears fell from my eyes

he wiped them away

' i love you

with all my might

and life

you gave me a reason to live

and sacrifice'

i looked at him

and replied

' i am not perfect

i am not her

but i do love you as well

i almost lost my life

but instead i gained you'

he smiled

' and you gave me life

for without you

i might as well be dead

as i said before

and i will say it again

and again

i love you'


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