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Nothing but Lies

Poem By: mystory
Young Adult


You're made of nothing but lies. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Aug 3, 2008    Reads: 64    Comments: 5    Likes: 2   


When I started to like you,

I thought it had been true love.

When you finally told me you loved me in retrun,

I was so excited.

You kept me believing that you cared.

You always told me you loved me,

And I returned the favor.

I thought that you reallyed cared.

I didn't knwo why I liked you.

You hated what I loved and loved what I hated.

We had absolutly nothing in commen.

Maybe it was just my lonely mind reaching out for someone--anyone.

Even someone like you.

Soon thoughmy feelings for you faded away,

As I met the person I'd been waiting for.

Suddenly you meant nothing to me.

Free from the grip of your spell at last,

I finally saw who you were.

A corrupt, distirbed mind only out for the glory.

I was lucky enough to have backed away before I got hurt.

I now now that what I had felt back then

Was not real love.

I had been so young then,

And you were even younger then me.

I should have known better than to belive in someone like you.

It didn't really sink in--what you'd done--until a while later.

You'd hurt not only me, but someone I cared about.

You'd moved on faster then I would have though possible.

Youd' never cared anythign about me.

I was just a possession to you.

Something for you to show off.

You will never know what real love is,

Until you grow up and give up your childish ways.

I realize now that you never meant anythign to me.

I have found what real love is,

Even if that love may never be returned.

I would wait forever even if they hated me.

That's what real love is.

Caring about that person--which you never really did.

If you really did care,

You would have been there for me,

Then and now.

But you never were and never will be.

Now you're far, far away,

And I'll never have to think of you again.

I've found what real love is.

Someone who relates to me in so many ways.

We weren't right for each other.

Nothing in common,

Nothing joining us.

You are too young, and too immature to know real love.

It was over before it even started.

Because you're nothing but lies.


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Comments:

Wow,this is sooo great and deep.Just perfect poem!I like it a lot.Full of emotions and so touchy.Its sad when someone is like that...But really really beautiful poem!

:)

Posted: Aug 5, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks, really glad that you liked it. ^^

okay, I luv this, and I would personally luv to dedicate this poem to Scott-my ex-boyfriend-u just described what I went through-it's like we feel the same things, but you are able to write about it, unlike myself. Thank u, and girl, please press on-they are not worth it-you have something special, so don't give up yet-the right person will respond to you the right way someday-I promise.. Take care, as always
xX*MegXx

Posted: Aug 6, 2008

Author Comment:

Oh, sure thing. Yeah, I'm over him now. It was like, a year ago or something when I started to realize he just wasn't worth it. I just though it would make a good poem, even if it's a year or so late. Thanks again. ^^

Emily
(not registered user)

That was great Carly!^^ I know people like that..

Posted: Aug 7, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks. I think everyone does.

Wow. I know this so well. Hardly anyone really cares about each other anymore, and never means it when they say that they love you... It's sad. This poem is my new favorite =]

Posted: Aug 8, 2008

Author Comment:

Yeah, I know what you mean. This world is so mixed up. Thanks.=D

By the way, I love the picture =]

Posted: Aug 9, 2008

Author Comment:

Oh, thank you. =]



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