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Submitted: Jul 6, 2008 Reads: 77 Comments: 5 Likes: 2
I'm bleeding...
But weird i can't feel a thing...
I have gone soo numb
And now don't feel anything...
And probably i'm going to bleed till death....
All because of you...
You stabbed me with your looks
Pierced me with your words
And torn me apart
By just ignoring me...
Can't you see me dying???
Didn't you ever had any feelings for me???
Or do you even have any thing like humanity
within you...to save me???
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Nice I loved it keep up the good work.
Posted: Jul 6, 2008
You are loved.. very painful poem... who cares about them.. take care of yourself young one...Olwen nice work
Posted: Jul 7, 2008
Love it :D One of your best poems, at least I think so.
Posted: Aug 12, 2008
I love this one, I can almost feel the pain you had when you wrote it. Really nice!
Posted: Sep 10, 2008
I love the words, but there are far too many elipsis points. Go back and read, see what you think. In my opinion, it drags down the beauty of the words and you never want to distort an amazing poem.
Lidsā„
Posted: Nov 26, 2008
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