Oooh, I really liked the image this one conjured up as I read! Mysterious strangers asking for a dance... very intriguing and kind of sexy lol. Gosh, I just keep returning to the image in my mind. Amazing poem, Nuttyz!

Posted: Aug 4, 2008

This had awesome imagery in it! Talented, much? haha

Posted: Aug 4, 2008

wooah how good the imagery! its amazing and original ( if i were a teacher id give it A+++ XD) hehe

how tempting you made the shadow dancer seem :D dreaammyyy XDXD
anyways awesome as usual XP
keep em coming!><
take care ^^

Posted: Aug 4, 2008

Hey nuttyz :) This is so sweet and beautiful! You really are talented. Take care, Regan

Posted: Aug 5, 2008

Wow! Its so mysterious and i love it!
Keep going!
Alex :)

Posted: Aug 6, 2008

Hey! I'd really appreciate your thoughts on my new poem: Last Flight! Also veiw my other writings: Secrets Hidden in the Castle Walls & In the Life of a Regular girl! Thanks!

Posted: Aug 8, 2008

Love the imagery, love the whole poem.

Posted: Aug 8, 2008

This is very delicately carved.
I do enjoy your style.
Keep writing my friend.

Posted: Aug 9, 2008

I love how it generated an atomatic image for me.

Posted: Aug 10, 2008

OMG i love it:] it is sooooo good

Posted: Aug 18, 2008

very mysterious.....LOVED IT!!!

Posted: Aug 21, 2008

I think you should have done more! to short! u should have done something like this after the second stanza

The music started
slow at first
and i danced with this stranger
As the music got faster
so did our pace
then we where dancing wildly

Something like that i think would have been good. Well done anyhoo!

Posted: Sep 8, 2008

Awwww this is so AWESOME!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!! Very Very good JOB!!!

Posted: Sep 12, 2008

Very mysterious and discriptive. :)

Lids♥

Posted: Nov 26, 2008