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Dreams and Reality.

Poem By: OHSHCKaori
Young Adult


What if our dreams and reality didn't match. What would happen. Just so you know, I wrote this three years ago, and just re-wrote it. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Apr 15, 2008    Reads: 40    Comments: 7    Likes: 2   


I never did anything amazing,

I never joined a winning team,

I never ran for student officer

All I ever did was dream.

In my dreams, my fantasies,

In my imagination, I was a hero,

But in real life, in reality,

I was a just a zero.

In real life, I was the girl,

Who dropped her books in the hall,

I was the dorky girl, clumsy

Who always seemed to fall.

But in my dreams, my reality,

I was amazing, helping all

In my  reality, everyone was special,

No one would let another fall.

In reality, I read about heroes,

People like Martin Luther and JFK,

I'd swear to myself, "You'll see,

I'll be like them someday."

But that day never dam,

And only after I'd left this world

Did I fully realize,

I wasn't ready for the world.

Now I'm in my dreams, My reality,

I'm a hero now, just not the usual kind.

I'm a special hero,

One that's hard to find.

So in both realities, I learned.

The world never failed me,

Only I had failed myself.

Maybe the problem with this world isn't that we don't trust each other. Maybe we need to trust ourselves in making our personal realities into a real reality.


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Comments:

this one i can really realate to i like it so i'm printing it off

Posted: Apr 15, 2008

Author Comment:

YAY!! That makes me really happy. As long as you don't copy it and say its yours I'm fine with that.
~Kaori

Hi Kaori :)
I like this, see it is like your dream reality became real. :-)

Posted: Apr 15, 2008

Author Comment:

Yeah that's what I was going for.
~Kaori

Confidence helps a lot

Posted: Apr 15, 2008

Author Comment:

Yeah it does. Thanks.
~Kaori

WOW....
Gave it a " I Like it"
A must read for all teenagers....

Posted: Apr 19, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks, I wasn't sure if anyone would like it, so I really appreciate it.
~Kaori

Hi Kaori! I like this poem. I somewhat can relate on it....

Posted: Apr 22, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks, Im glad you like it.

I dream all the time but then I crash back down to reality and realise I have a long way to go until I achieve those dreams. I really enjoyed this poem and it conveys a great message to all.

Keep up the good work.

Olola.

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it.
~Kaori

KAORI, i loved each and every word of it....it showed honesty and truth and confidence....the confidence to 'Go ahead and win"....And U WILL WIN

Posted: Jun 12, 2008

Author Comment:

Aww thanks. I'm glad you liked it.
~Kaori



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