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Poem By: Olola
Young Adult

Tags: arguments, family feuds, motherhood, disagreements, child

Just something that came to my head after a family arguement... View table of contents...

Submitted: Apr 19, 2008 Reads: 46 Comments: 4 Likes: 0

Mum is just your name.

Motherhood is just your job.

Me, I'm just your responsibility.

But there is no love.

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Comments:

Eric JHRB Egan

Wow, very personal, I do not know what to say.

Posted: Apr 20, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks Eric - it is very personal as I was very angry when I wrote this. Thanks a lot. Olola

stephhlebreton

awww, that's really sad. Nicely written, very straight froward. I felt a pang in my heart reading it. Sad and lovely ma belle. Good job.
Steph:)

Posted: Apr 20, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks a lot Steph. That was exactly what I wanted everyone to feel; sad and I wanted it to be straight forward because when I wrote this, that was exactly what I felt. Thanks again and I will definately be checking out your work. Olola.

Wandiola

Wow, I know how you feel, sometimes I get so mad that kind of thing comes in my mind! good work!

Posted: May 8, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks a lot Wandiola! Olola.

Those

I know how you feel-well, felt after looking at the date.

I feel like I'm just weighing everyone down with my prescence.

ANyways, i loved it. It was simple, and meaningful.

Posted: Jun 20, 2008