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Disney Daisy

Poetry By: pakla
Young adult

Writing to a friend,,,,remembering moments,,,and fulfilling a long forgotten promise

Submitted:Jun 7, 2012    Reads: 16    Comments: 2    Likes: 2   

Disney Daisy

Dear Dai

Here's writing to let you know;

You're a plant composite

Like a diamond rose

With golden petals

It's the cast of that specula

Whose reflection mirrors

In my heart and life

That shape of love

The lower case of M in graffiti

In red ink and 3D

For the places we used to sit

In the dark and cold

On carpet of concrete

Under the light of moon and star

And you would point to the skies

Descriptive of the beauty of wondrous creation

In language witty and well thought

In tones enrapturing and captivating

How you would walk triumphant

And majestic

Like some queen in her palace

Full of honor and womanly dignity

Recapitulating the past

Challenging the present

And so dissecting the future

With amazing accuracy

Precise eschatological order

And enviable aim

Your plans dreams and ambitions

You've got destiny

You remember that day I hope

How you sat down

And gave out a pose

Like a well edited photo

Artistic and scenic

Of high quality and award-winning

That's given a young writer

A thousand adjectives and billion lines

And so halved his nightmares

You must be gone

That I know

But how too soon

For all the promises I had made

This is all I would write

In the aftermath of it all

The cry of forgotten memories

The sigh of lost friendship

Sincerely, Old pal

By pat k lamba


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