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Fragile Strength

Poem By: poet 3
Young Adult


Mine and Reapers second attempt at joined poetry! :D
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Submitted: Apr 5, 2008    Reads: 39    Comments: 4    Likes: 1   


Hands as soft as steel,

Eyes as light as stone,

Chilling my heart to the core.

When she walks past she is broken,

But the breaks only make her stronger,

Her courage as mighty as a mountian,

Her wit as bright as the stars,

Free-willed and headstrong,

Dreams spread out in layers,

Dreams of a better life,

A life without fire.

She lives in wonder,

As fate entwines us as one,

Fate that binds us all,

To her heart of gold,

Deepened with regrets,

Regrets that threaten us all,

As she shifts through grains of time,

and walks a path of destiny,

This girl who seems so small...


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Comments:

Hey i didn't know u put that last line in! well it gives it so much more kick! Nice font u used!

Posted: Apr 5, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks!
I figured you knew I was going to add it so I did!!!

this is so good, you guys rock!! :)

Posted: Apr 9, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks! :DDDDDD
Reaper says thanks too! :D

Really , Really good one !

Posted: Apr 9, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you again! :D
It was a combined piece. Me and Reaper wrote it together! :D

An interesting project.
I like it.

Posted: Apr 25, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks!



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