listening to them talk,
hearing the words but not understanding,
I hear a car
then a crash,
the words dead on arrival come next,
it finally hits home
that your gone forever,
never coming back,
to joke and laugh,
to tease me and nag me about a guy,
it finally hits home that
you wont be there when I need a shoulder to cry on,
that you wont be there to tell me that you love me one day,
after what you had said this morning,
you went out driving and hit a pot hole,
flipping your car on the ice,
they arrived to late but you had on a smile,
at least you died happy they say,
but do they know what you had said?
they dont,
so they cant know that I will never get over you,
they say that I will,
but would you if it had been me?
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This is a poem I wrote after My friend Died in a car accident! :( View table of contents...
Submitted: Jul 30, 2007 Reads: 575 Comments: 6 Likes: 1
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I know what it is like to lose somebody you truly care about suddenly and unexpectedly.......While I believe that you can never put into words the loss and pain that accompany such a tragedy, you have done a great job and come really close. Keep up the good work.
Posted: Jul 31, 2007
I'm sorry for your loss. It's never easy dealing with death. Great poem. Eileen
Posted: Aug 31, 2007
Amanda
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Hey, um I know nothing people say helps, but I'm sorry obviously, but also, I was in a car accident and my best friend died instantly.. so as stupid as it sounds I kinda understand and I think you did a pretty good job interpretting what your feeling.
Posted: Mar 15, 2008
jennifer
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i just lost a friend a really close friend in a car crash early saturday moring @ 3:00am about an 10 mins after i saw him it's hard to kno u'll never see someone so close ever again I know what it is like to lose somebody you truly care about.... unexpectedly....
Posted: Apr 6, 2008
wow. i'm so sorry. this is great and beautiful.
again, i'm so sorry for your loss. how horrible. :(
Posted: Sep 23, 2008
anonymous
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my bestfriend died in a car accident last summer its the hardest thing too go through she was 17 i miss her so much
Posted: Nov 9, 2008
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