Valentine's Beware.

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Poem By: poet 3
Young Adult

Tags: valentines day

A poem I wrote today about V-day... and how much it stinks!
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Submitted: Feb 14, 2008 Reads: 55 Comments: 7 Likes: 2

Valentines beware,

For I too, can play unfair.

Waiting for a rose,

Or writing a prose,

I guess you may think,

Because you are pink,

That I should shout love,

and flutter like a dove.

Valentines beware,

For I too, can play unfair,

Cards and flowers,

And chocolate showers,

With frills and lace,

a smothering grace.

Balloons and cake,

A picnic by the lake.

Ugh! Valentines beware,

I wish I could play so unfair.

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Comments:

devilrod

I enjoyed this very much.
Good good.

Posted: Feb 14, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank You! XD
My friends made me finish it, I really wasn't going to, but I am glad that I did! XD

~Apple~

gerabel

enjoyable read, Apple. You wouldn't really want to play unfair, would you?? LOL Happy writing.....Jerry

Posted: Feb 15, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks Jerry!
Sometimes I wish I could play so unfair, life would be easier at times if I could! Though it wouldnt be as much fun...

With beautiful bright blue eyes, a lot of brazilian boys would like to date with you. Valentine's day it is like others Holidays that just have one propose : Take out our money. In Brazil we celebrate V. in 12, june , and it is boring. You did a great poem, and if you have someone enjoy without care for Valentine's day.
But Great !

Posted: Feb 15, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you for the compliments J!
The poem was just something I wrote while my teacher was making us watch videos from Youtube... :D
Glad you liked it though! :D

mum55

Great read .......very enjoyable......Till later Juliet

Posted: Feb 15, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you so much! :D

Robert Storm.
(not registered user)

Hey poet that was cool. I haven't been on for a while so I thought I would check out your stuff some tonight. Keep on wit 'it.

Posted: Feb 25, 2008

Author Comment:

Ok, The page doesn't tell me who you are...
So thank you!
Not sure if I know you or not, but hey! Thanks for the comments! :D

Lionheart
(not registered user)

Hahah, if you wish to play unfairly can i join in the game? I'm not a fan of the 'excuse for love' day.
Very nicely done it made me smile all the way through because i guess i kinda hold this feeling... i dont let any out obviously because then i become the holiday pooper hahaha.
Very nice, loved it!!!

Posted: Mar 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks!
I absolutley HATE "Singles Awareness Day" It is sooo STUPID!!
Ugh... Anyway, I am glad you liked this one, It is now one of my personal favorites!

seesawmae

this is really good.. i myself don't like valentines day.. it's such a sad excuse for a day, and is way to commercialized, wheres the love in money? Great poem!

Posted: Apr 5, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks Mae!
I hate Valentines more then any other day... So I wrote this poem for it! :D

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