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What Emotions do you see?

Poem By: poet 3
Young Adult


Tags: emotions, feeling

A poem I wrote out of boredom! View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Sep 16, 2007    Reads: 60    Comments: 3    Likes: 0   


What emotions do you see,

When you look at me?

Sadness, Lonlieness?

Dont look at me that way,

Like you know me enough to say

That you can help.

If I said go away,

Would you leave and stay that way?

Or would you just laugh at me,

Look through me,

And see,

Exactly what I want you to.

For if you saw through me like you claim,

You would know what you say is false,

If you could truly see,

You would be sure to know,

What emotions I see.

I see Pity and Depth,

Depression and Understanding.

But most of all I see JOY.

Because I know me.

So what emotions do you see,

When you look at me?


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Comments:

you should get bored more often. I enjoyed reading this!

Posted: Sep 16, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank You!!!
I am always bored.... even when I am having fun...
I should just use that time more wisely next time!!!
Hehehehehheh.... I am VERY glad you liked the fruits of my boredom!!

people allways write thir best work when thay are bored

Posted: Sep 17, 2007

Author Comment:

I noticed!!!
I Love to write When I'm bored...
Thank you SOOOO much!!!

pleasing to the heart.
beautiful.

Posted: Jan 20, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank You so much!
Glad you liked it! :D



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