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The makeup of me

Poem By: Pokojskixxx
Young Adult


To be or not to be, that is the question.
- William Shakespear View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jun 3, 2008    Reads: 46    Comments: 6    Likes: 1   


I am the daughter of the sun

My brillilance shines so brightly

Later to be covered up by the gray

That darkens the world around it

An eagle soaring high

Not high enough to escape the troubles

The color brown would blend into a crowd

If it was not for my voice sreaming so loud

I am the taste of revenge

Only known as bitter sweet

The smell of pine trees

Standing tall in the forest

The texture of sand

Every grain is rough

And hard to get through

But can be melted smooth and translucent

I am ...

Me

a.p.xxx


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Comments:

hi! pokojski. a terrific poem. i enjoyed it. when u realise urself, u know u r following the right direction. keep it up. ;-)

Posted: Jun 5, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you very much it's nice to get an intelligant ( forgive my spellin) comment every once in a while.

really good!

Posted: Jun 27, 2008

i remeber that ashton. oh, perfect.


L ♥

Posted: Jun 28, 2008

I like it! :-D

Posted: Jul 25, 2008

I like it! :-D

Posted: Jul 25, 2008

i like it. the wording is great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted: Oct 20, 2008



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