You flash me those little secret smiles
And my insides turn to mush
But then you stop smiling
And you use your mouth to talk
Then i hate you like you're me.
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what you do to me
Poem By: Pokojskixxx
Young Adult
this goes to adam again,the one i hate to love. View table of contents...
Submitted: Feb 22, 2008 Reads: 54 Comments: 5 Likes: 1
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Good poem. It was hard to read, though. Maybe you should use a lighter color inside the dark purple.
MA
Posted: Feb 22, 2008
Hard to read, but smiles have funny twists
Posted: Feb 22, 2008
k good, hard to read thought. :)
Posted: Feb 23, 2008
k good, its was really hard to read when my dog eat my contacts! lol yea.............
Posted: Feb 24, 2008
One comment dat sayz "I can read it"
LAL...
Posted: Jun 6, 2008
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