Love
Love is like
Flowers
They're beautiful
But they die

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Submitted: Aug 25, 2008 Reads: 42 Comments: 5 Likes: 0
Love
Love is like
Flowers
They're beautiful
But they die
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Hehe I liked this, short and simple; but with alot of meaning. Great job! Keep my posted for new updates, k?
Posted: Aug 25, 2008
your super
Posted: Aug 25, 2008
Well, that's straight to the point alright! LOL. Good metaphor!
Posted: Aug 25, 2008
Aww, that's sad. I like flowers, why do they have to die? ;)
Love doesn't always die like the poor flowers, I hope.
Love the to-the-point style, keep me posted,
Javelin
Posted: Aug 26, 2008
Hehe I just thought of something; I was on myspace before and I saw an icon that said: The boy gave the girl 12 roses, 11 real, 1 fake; and said, "I'll love you until the last one dies."
Posted: Aug 31, 2008
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