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Love Stinks

Poem By: StephiAM
Young Adult


Tags: love

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Submitted: Aug 25, 2008    Reads: 42    Comments: 5    Likes: 0   


Love

Love is like

Flowers

They're beautiful

But they die


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Comments:

Hehe I liked this, short and simple; but with alot of meaning. Great job! Keep my posted for new updates, k?

Posted: Aug 25, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks I will put a new one up today

your super

Posted: Aug 25, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks I will have a new one today

Well, that's straight to the point alright! LOL. Good metaphor!

Posted: Aug 25, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks I am publsihing a new 1 2day

Aww, that's sad. I like flowers, why do they have to die? ;)

Love doesn't always die like the poor flowers, I hope.

Love the to-the-point style, keep me posted,
Javelin

Posted: Aug 26, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks I am publishing a new one today

Hehe I just thought of something; I was on myspace before and I saw an icon that said: The boy gave the girl 12 roses, 11 real, 1 fake; and said, "I'll love you until the last one dies."

Posted: Aug 31, 2008

Author Comment:

That is so sweet. Thanks 4 reaing my poems.



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