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Submitted: Jun 25, 2008    Reads: 24    Comments: 3    Likes: 2   


you say you can't write

but have you ever tried?

just write your feelings down

don't worry about how it might sound

because before long

the words will fly

just be truthful,

don't lie

if you try  to hide

what you feel

what you write

might not seem real

so believe in you

and all i know you can do

and give yourself a chance

there's more than one

way to dance


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there's more than one

way to dance

*sighs* those lines were very beautiful, what a strong way to finish off a poem! This was very inspirational and truly touched me. great job!!
Steph(:

Posted: Jun 26, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks :]

I LOVE diz poem.

Posted: Jul 3, 2008

once again, simple but perfect. some poems are too complex and confusing, and i feel like i'm in english class while i'm reading them, but not yours

Posted: Jul 31, 2008

Author Comment:

ohh thank you, it means alot



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