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Love was enough

Poem By: storyofmylife
Young Adult


poem about love and lying. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jun 24, 2008    Reads: 51    Comments: 4    Likes: 4   


i love you, you said.

and so i believed,

that there would be us

because to speak those three powerful words is different from lust,

but you were good at lying,

and i was always trying,

to make you see me,

not who you wanted me to be,

and just when i had gotten fed up,

you say, i love you,

and to me that was enough,

and i believed you for so long,

without you i didnt think i'd be strong,

and i thought that it was true,

but the day you left the last thing you said was, i love you,

and i never got to say it,

but i think it everyday,

if me and you could have happened

some other way,

if you hadnt lied,

and i hadnt tried,

then you would have realized,

that i love you too.


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Comments:

wow, this poem really touched me, mostly cuz I went through a simular situtation and I couldn't put it to words better myself! I really enjoyed reading it, the emotion was well captured and reaches out! lovely!
Steph(:

Posted: Jun 25, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks :] glad you liked it.

So sweet and a little sad. I like diz poem.

Posted: Jul 3, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks :]

hi! s. this seems like a cross-connection. two people at wrong place at wrong time. tad sad but that's life. but interesting view. lol. ;-)

Posted: Jul 31, 2008

Author Comment:

yeah u got it right, it is life, u live and learn lol

=]

there does seem to be an awful lot of people who speak with a forked tongue on this site , representative i suppose . i do hope you keep demanding truth and trust , you certainly deserve it

Posted: Aug 1, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you again, i enjoy your comments, it means alot



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