The Pigment Beneath

~~A life with love with have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses~~
-Anonymous
The rose that is my poetic story:
They finally help the wounds heal after all this time…

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~This was written for KitKat's challenge~
*The past is often filled with good memories as well as a handful of those we wish we could forget, though we simply just can't.
*Sometimes something as a simple as a flower could make one realize that the past is gone, and there's a bright, new future right beyond the horizon ahead.
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Submitted: Aug 17, 2008 Reads: 81 Comments: 12 Likes: 1
The Pigment Beneath

~~A life with love with have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses~~
-Anonymous
The rose that is my poetic story:
They finally help the wounds heal after all this time…
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AMAZING!! I should've expected this great of a poem after reading your other one. Great job! Message you soon :P
Posted: Aug 17, 2008
Beautiful, to say the least. Brilliant ending.
Posted: Aug 17, 2008
Nice one, I loved every moment of it!
Posted: Aug 18, 2008
Wow, I adored this piece very much. Keep up your work, You have alot of passion.
-DD
Posted: Aug 18, 2008
ooo i liked it!!
"life with love with have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses"
...wow! THAT got me hooked! your really good and you said it only took a few moments????
grrrr...jealous much
Posted: Aug 18, 2008
This is good. I like the purple picture of your rose. I love any shades of violet. Anyway, keep on.
Posted: Aug 20, 2008
I really liked the comparison. Very singular. You've really painted a whole new picture for life. What i can't understand is that how come it was for kitkat competition? Isn't it a chocolate ? :p
Posted: Sep 21, 2008
I love it i gotta read more of your work
Posted: Sep 21, 2008
This is truly beautiful poem.. I loved it.
Posted: Sep 21, 2008
hi! u. i completely agree with the future part. it is so true. incidentally, violet is the color of royalty - rich, futuristic and hopeful. good work here. lol. ;-)
Posted: Sep 22, 2008
Another excelent work... WOW.
I love this one a lot...it's...So good. I wish I could write as good as you. You have real talent. LOL. :)
Posted: Sep 24, 2008
i was asked ot while reading this poem...maybe this boy is you violet petals....should i say yes???
i like him....i think i will, but what do you think???
i like this poem btw....who knew that i would like two poems by the same person :D
i love3 the intro to tjis poem especially
Posted: Oct 3, 2008
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