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The Pigment Beneath

Poem By: UnspokenSoul22
Young Adult


~This was written for KitKat's challenge~
*The past is often filled with good memories as well as a handful of those we wish we could forget, though we simply just can't.
*Sometimes something as a simple as a flower could make one realize that the past is gone, and there's a bright, new future right beyond the horizon ahead.
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Submitted: Aug 17, 2008    Reads: 81    Comments: 12    Likes: 1   


The Pigment Beneath

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~~A life with love with have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses~~

-Anonymous

The rose that is my poetic story:

Violet petals fall from the heavens,
Beautiful, to say the least,
As they leave a fresh scent behind.
Reminding me of new comings,
And regretful leavings...
This new scent,
It feels as if a rain is washing my skin,
Scrubbing away the flesh,
Showing the true being below,
The bright colors of my soul,
The shape of my spirit.
With the future ahead,
Bygones being bygones,
The past is gone.
Now begins the next journey,
The next chapter we've all been waiting for.
These simple petals,
So violet, so pure,
Bringing more than a sweet scent.
They bring change.
They bring memories.

They finally help the wounds heal after all this time…


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Comments:

AMAZING!! I should've expected this great of a poem after reading your other one. Great job! Message you soon :P

Posted: Aug 17, 2008

Author Comment:

=D This little thing took five precious minutes.
Jeez, I can't believe it's /that/ good!
I'm just writing about things I feel..
=) Thanks, KitKat.

Am I allowed to do another color?

Beautiful, to say the least. Brilliant ending.

Posted: Aug 17, 2008

Author Comment:

Ahh, quoting me, now are you? =)
I'm soo flattered.
Wait..I did write that, right? 0-0
Whoa. I'm going crazy!

Thanks for the lovely comment!

Nice one, I loved every moment of it!

Posted: Aug 18, 2008

Author Comment:

=) Every moment?
Yayy!!

Wow, I adored this piece very much. Keep up your work, You have alot of passion.

-DD

Posted: Aug 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Ehh..Actually, I'm writing another poem about passion!
Maybe you'll adore it as well.

ooo i liked it!!
"life with love with have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses"
...wow! THAT got me hooked! your really good and you said it only took a few moments????
grrrr...jealous much

Posted: Aug 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha. =) I love that quote myself.
Thanks. Yeah, it did.
Awww..don't be jealous! :D

This is good. I like the purple picture of your rose. I love any shades of violet. Anyway, keep on.

Posted: Aug 20, 2008

I really liked the comparison. Very singular. You've really painted a whole new picture for life. What i can't understand is that how come it was for kitkat competition? Isn't it a chocolate ? :p

Posted: Sep 21, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks

I love it i gotta read more of your work

Posted: Sep 21, 2008

This is truly beautiful poem.. I loved it.

Posted: Sep 21, 2008

hi! u. i completely agree with the future part. it is so true. incidentally, violet is the color of royalty - rich, futuristic and hopeful. good work here. lol. ;-)

Posted: Sep 22, 2008

Another excelent work... WOW.
I love this one a lot...it's...So good. I wish I could write as good as you. You have real talent. LOL. :)

Posted: Sep 24, 2008

i was asked ot while reading this poem...maybe this boy is you violet petals....should i say yes???
i like him....i think i will, but what do you think???

i like this poem btw....who knew that i would like two poems by the same person :D
i love3 the intro to tjis poem especially

Posted: Oct 3, 2008



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