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Barefoot Mending

Poem By: wikhaiinn
Young Adult


this one has a similarity with the poem "Out the door" which was published earlier... but this poem was written earlier. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: May 22, 2008    Reads: 79    Comments: 22    Likes: 6   


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There maybe worthless nightmares in your head
And countless tears that fall from yourselves ahead,
But always think that whatever comes to you,
Comes to you, to be carried gladly with faith
Nothing comes near to you with no purpose
No, nothing really matters but happiness indeed
You cannot have that with just a simple read
You seek that in your heart and know its own…
What you have now,
Is nothing compared for what’s for you
And what you see,
Should be no trouble to you
For you are the only one that holds whats next for you
I don’t really care of what they talk about you,
I don’t want to look and find the wrong things you do
For I only believe from the words you say,
No matter how many blood may flow from me today
It doesn’t appear as a disgrace to me
If no one ever saw the beauty you have
I don’t mind,
If they don’t love you anyway
It doesn’t cost a thing
If I’ll love you for this is what I feel
I maybe not sure,
Or you may not believe on what I say,
But I’ll prove it this way,
The way it should be,
Unblind and true…;
If they see nothing but your pain
Don’t hold it and let go,
If they won’t stop speaking your name,
Just believe on yourself
And to the one you should pray for;
And if they continue to make your life miserable
No, don’t think of it in your mind,
Be strong of what you can be
When challenge approaches you,
Never accept it as a challenge to die for,
But a test to settle in,
Like learning to manage what you should
And don’t think of what you should not
Whether to be a sparkling winner,
Or an inspiring loser,
Oh always keep in mind.
There’s no winner,
There’s no loser,
There are just things not for you
And just time that’s not yet going in you
Whatever happens in your life,
Never give up like you’re dieing in sadness
Losing blood is no disgrace
Unachieving your goal is no mishap
But forgetting that you have God,
The one that can do anything for you…
So live your life happily and enjoy it
Then die with glee and felicity,
Don’t you cry in defeat
No don’t think of the worthless things you did,
Please don’t you look back like you’re weary having them
Face them like you were accepting them as a part of you past,
Have them as gifts you did not expect,
Open their wrappers like you weren’t surprised,
Like old books written in gibberish,
Like old pictures
You used to keep,
Or obsolete words
To be forgotten
And renewed...

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Comments:

Truly captivating... Thanks for this poem, Wikhaiinn. You're right, instead of living in fear and paranoid, we should always put our trust in God, be thankful to Him no matter how hard things get:)

Posted: May 22, 2008

Author Comment:

oh your touching:) thank you... I hope I can really write more like this:)

Ouuu, another inspiring poem...love the song as well. You can have ice tea for this one! maybe a bit of chips too:P lol, great poem my dear!
Steph(:

Posted: May 22, 2008

Author Comment:

oh thank you at last! i have ice tea:) yeeepeee... thank you so much:)

I loved the poem and the music was a nice surprise.

Posted: May 22, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you for that:) have a nice day:)

i dont have spaekers where i am right now but ill find away to listen to the song later. As for the poem.... it was beautiful and inspiring. I hope you read and comment mine sometime soon.

Posted: May 22, 2008

Author Comment:

oh yes I will read your work... oh ... sorry for making the music bother you/...

i LOVE it:] it hits my heart very much and keep up the good work.

Posted: May 22, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you so much :)
hmm... does it hit your heart?... hmm... thank you so much for your time to read this:)

i love this, i sort of feel that way sometimes lol, you have talent! :]

*MASHA*

Posted: May 22, 2008

Author Comment:

hmm... I do? ahyeah... everybody has :) hehe...

kournielle
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hey you're doing good ah!hehe... breathetaking ang talent haha...

Posted: May 22, 2008

Author Comment:

haha... slamat

Wila!
My favorite from you.^^

Posted: May 22, 2008

Author Comment:

wow thank you kuya tatay :) XD
~bait tlga ^_^

Good job! A little shiver went down my spine when I read this. I'll be reading and watching out for more :P

Posted: May 23, 2008

Author Comment:

hmm... that's good news! :) have a nice day! :)

this is a new turn in poetry i never really read it but this was really cool and diff to read as always keep it up!

Posted: May 23, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you a lot:) for the comment and appreciation:)
you're so kind:)

i loved it, keep writing =)

Posted: May 24, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you=) have a nice day:)

This one is my favourite and you are a tender girl with a strong soul....

God bless you buddy
this sure is my favourite. I wish i think like you...lol

Posted: May 29, 2008

Author Comment:

oh another heart-warming comment:) God bless for you, too :) this is my favorite :) but my very favorite is not posted here yet :)

that was a very inspiring peom!
we should not break down in sadness but just think of it as a challange.
Everything does happen for a reason.
Very lovely peom. :)

Posted: May 31, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you so much:) have a nice day

It's great! I really liked it!

Posted: Jun 1, 2008

Author Comment:

really? whew that's good news!

Very inspiring. I hope everyone gets to read this. Pwede 'to sa card--pang-bluemountain. ^^

I'm glad you look up life that way. :-)

I like this. Keep writing, Kababayan. Godbless! :-)

Posted: Jun 2, 2008

Author Comment:

Pinoy kren pla dko npansin XD ehhe... ang tanga ko tlga... !!! XD wow... pang blue mountain? ehhe akala ko Hallmark XD xa nga pla thanks coz you're glad ^ ^ sna mdmi Pinoy dito.. ^ ^ taas ntin bandera ntin!!! ^ ^ Cge kababayan slamat talaga... God bless us! ^ ^

I love it...
The music also very matching o...
Keke...
Keep it up.
Want to read more your new poem...
Thanks for sharing it.

Posted: Jun 3, 2008

Author Comment:

oh thank you for loving it, that's such a good news ^ ^

That probably took awhile to come up with, but boy did it reap what it sowed.(It was good. I really liked the whole challenge part of the poem. It was nice. Keep it up ;)

Posted: Jun 3, 2008

Author Comment:

oh thank you so much... ^ ^ I dunno what to call you ... and I dunno the right way to read your name XD I'll just call you broiler so it would be easy XD If its ok with you?

Cool combination of the picture the poem and the music.

Posted: Jun 3, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you so much^ ^ have a nice day:)

great poem,love the music, adds great emphases.

Posted: Jun 4, 2008

Author Comment:

really? thank you:) have a nice day!

God bless us

I found some true and wise insight in your words, really well said;) and without all the fluffery that gets in the way~I LIKED IT! raindown

Posted: Jun 4, 2008

Author Comment:

Raindown, Thank you so much:) Have a pleasant day :)

I liked it because, I've been there too. Hope to have you read some of mine and to hear your opinion.

Posted: Jun 6, 2008

Author Comment:

I hope too , when I do have time for it :)

hey I like this, this is reall good :) keep it up

~Brad

Posted: Jun 12, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you :) have a great day :)



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