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Random First Lines: That thing, that feeling Its a torment.A binding.Placed upon limbs, restricting movements.Restricting the... : Poetry » Read
this one has a similarity with the poem "Out the door" which was published earlier... but this poem was written earlier. View table of contents...
Submitted: May 22, 2008 Reads: 79 Comments: 22 Likes: 6
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Truly captivating... Thanks for this poem, Wikhaiinn. You're right, instead of living in fear and paranoid, we should always put our trust in God, be thankful to Him no matter how hard things get:)
Posted: May 22, 2008
Ouuu, another inspiring poem...love the song as well. You can have ice tea for this one! maybe a bit of chips too:P lol, great poem my dear!
Steph(:
Posted: May 22, 2008
I loved the poem and the music was a nice surprise.
Posted: May 22, 2008
i dont have spaekers where i am right now but ill find away to listen to the song later. As for the poem.... it was beautiful and inspiring. I hope you read and comment mine sometime soon.
Posted: May 22, 2008
i LOVE it:] it hits my heart very much and keep up the good work.
Posted: May 22, 2008
i love this, i sort of feel that way sometimes lol, you have talent! :]
*MASHA*
Posted: May 22, 2008
hey you're doing good ah!hehe... breathetaking ang talent haha...
Posted: May 22, 2008
Wila!
My favorite from you.^^
Posted: May 22, 2008
Good job! A little shiver went down my spine when I read this. I'll be reading and watching out for more :P
Posted: May 23, 2008
this is a new turn in poetry i never really read it but this was really cool and diff to read as always keep it up!
Posted: May 23, 2008
i loved it, keep writing =)
Posted: May 24, 2008
This one is my favourite and you are a tender girl with a strong soul....
God bless you buddy
this sure is my favourite. I wish i think like you...lol
Posted: May 29, 2008
that was a very inspiring peom!
we should not break down in sadness but just think of it as a challange.
Everything does happen for a reason.
Very lovely peom. :)
Posted: May 31, 2008
It's great! I really liked it!
Posted: Jun 1, 2008
Very inspiring. I hope everyone gets to read this. Pwede 'to sa card--pang-bluemountain. ^^
I'm glad you look up life that way. :-)
I like this. Keep writing, Kababayan. Godbless! :-)
Posted: Jun 2, 2008
I love it...
The music also very matching o...
Keke...
Keep it up.
Want to read more your new poem...
Thanks for sharing it.
Posted: Jun 3, 2008
That probably took awhile to come up with, but boy did it reap what it sowed.(It was good. I really liked the whole challenge part of the poem. It was nice. Keep it up ;)
Posted: Jun 3, 2008
Cool combination of the picture the poem and the music.
Posted: Jun 3, 2008
great poem,love the music, adds great emphases.
Posted: Jun 4, 2008
I found some true and wise insight in your words, really well said;) and without all the fluffery that gets in the way~I LIKED IT! raindown
Posted: Jun 4, 2008
I liked it because, I've been there too. Hope to have you read some of mine and to hear your opinion.
Posted: Jun 6, 2008
hey I like this, this is reall good :) keep it up
~Brad
Posted: Jun 12, 2008
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