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Out the door

Poem By: wikhaiinn
Young Adult


about reaching dreams, self esteem and overcoming rotten judgement (title is temporary)

~and by the way
~don't run View table of contents...

 

Submitted: May 19, 2008    Reads: 61    Comments: 8    Likes: 3   


Out the Door


- B y W i k h a i i n n

struggling

Anyone can write,
Anyone can sing,
Anyone can dance.
Anyone can dream,
Anyone can fly,
Anyone will do,
Anything like me and you;
So go on, fell free to make a change
The options are in you,
All you need is to prepare your menu;
And there’s nothing more you can’t do,
You just have to pick the right path for you,
If you could just believe that everything will be fine;
The guts you wear is what you have
Feel home to roam around,
Fear is nothing but an obstacle for a stunt;
Don’t forget where you have begun;
You’ll be going there to finish a lap,
Each day will start with a sunshine
And yours from the melody sung by your eyes;
Each time that you will go
To test you hands,
Every man that doesn’t look
Will be surprised,
For deceiving their minds not to believe
That a person like can pull out reality
From a very impossible fantasy;
So go on direct your ways
Paint your vision like an artwork we’ll be amazed
There’s no dress aint fit for you
Wear any and see what you wish
Let me here that
And we’ll make it real
Don’t run from it
It’s beautiful…
See, I’m sure
There’s something for you
Just go on and think of your own scenic view,
The place set to dine for anyone new
Carefully prepared for someone like you…;
So take the recipe sewn to you,
Baby, worry not,
Never be blue…
I know
Upset will be here,
It will flow in your river
Somewhere you should keep neat and clean
Somewhat specially served in dessert…
No don’t be fooled by the mirror
It’s not your reflection
Compared to the sky above you,
Don’t listen to their words,
But your thought,
Move it gently
With sincerity,
Cover your face not
And show them what you’ve got
Boy, look straight to where you going
You have a long way far from home…
So be brave when you walk back along
It could be better as before,
Take your ticket
And let’s walk somewhere
Pointed by your core…
Oh dear friend,
Take a deep breathe
And walk out that door
Take your first step
On that floor;
Walk with delight
But don’t run.

peoplebeach.people

beach.peoplebeach.

- Wikhaiinn


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Comments:

beautiful, absolutely beautiful

Posted: May 19, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you, thank you :) very much...

and being the one first to comment here oh:)

its nice of you:)

This is a great poem for people with low self esteem. it's such a shame that the world today has to be so shallow and focused on the outside, huh?

Posted: May 19, 2008

Author Comment:

yes! Oh I hate the way they've been trying to pull you down... XD Oh sorry I just won't let them do that XD

i liked it
i liked your other one better though
the hearts are f-awesome though
:}

Posted: May 19, 2008

Author Comment:

hmm... f-awesome? why can't I catch that XD
ok sorry about that... but I can't just catch itXD

A lot of optimism, and confidence. I like it so very much.

Posted: May 20, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you so much:)
Have a nice day
and
Godbless:)

Great ! Very very good one .

Posted: May 20, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you:) so much:)

have a great day:)

Aww this is an exceptionally awesome poem
I LOVE IT
:)
-Ally

Posted: May 20, 2008

Author Comment:

hmm... I didn't know that this fits the word exceptional:)
hmm... thank you for that:)
its enlightening:)

REALLY? I can do ALL those things! WOoohooo! lol. But on a serious note, lol, It is a beautiful and inspiring poem, next time I ever doubt myself I'll have to come back to this page and seek comfort and encouragement from your brilliant words! Well done ma belle!
Steph(:

Posted: May 20, 2008

Author Comment:

hmm... so why do you know my nickname? ohhhhh.... well, good thing you didn't call me Imao XD this one's serious... but when I try to make you laugh... make sure that you will... coz I'll take your food XD

I can't wear a dress though
Hahahaha

Good poem wila.^^
Ansaya nito

Posted: May 22, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha... you can't wear a dress XD why didn't I think of that! here~~~ take a coat hehe... dali bago malagoat XD



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