Submitted: Mar 27, 2009
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When I close my eyes
And think about paradise
I see more huge cries;
And where I sleep
Is where they weep,
So much to let go
All their sorrow, like tomorrow
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If no one cares
No one loves,
No one risks
And no one calls
Who would they be,
Those who tremble beneath the trench?
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Terra firma.
Solid ground,
Full of pain?
Full of clay.
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When no one doubts,
No one fails;
Where no one stands
No one learns
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And every time I close my eyes
I see more of it,
Where I sleep unawakened,
When what I feel does not matter…
To anyone, or any who;
…But to God, yes I do,
Too priceless to be tormented…
…So much of the strength
From strife and struggle…
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Comments:
Alice
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hey hon, this is beautiful. i love the use of 'terra firma' and the stanza you use it in. and your final stanza is great :) strife and struggle are all part of the journey through life and its what makes us grow and learn to stand strong, and be 'terra firma'
great poem :D
Posted: Mar 27, 2009
Tonton
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terra firma..
what a good title!..
alam mo nman na i've always admired the way you invent different things through your vast ideas dba?.. sna you keep on harnessing your thoughts pra makagawa ka pa ng ibang literary works na kasing ganda nito.. i know na dream mo tlga ang mgng isng magaling na writer.. i'm always here to support you.. be passionate and you'll achieve your goals..
Posted: Mar 27, 2009
akhie
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ahmm,..db yan ang gngwa mo khpon?but I notice that mgnda ung gnwa mo...
wla ako mssv kndi..jst express ur feeling sa mga poem mo pra rmdm din ng mga nag babasa ang gs2 mo iphwtig sa lht ng tao...un ang d best way pra mkgwa kpa ng mas mgnda pa jn..^^
-hoN-
Posted: Mar 27, 2009
Well done, your wisdom burns strong.
Posted: Mar 29, 2009
