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i'm feeling so.............desolate

Poem By: xxemoxbfsxx
Young Adult


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Submitted: Dec 30, 2007    Reads: 85    Comments: 3    Likes: 1   


Desolate

All i see is darkness

I have become so desolate

Sociaty doesn't see me...

Understand me

And neither do you

If you did i wouldn't be standing here crying

Wishing i wasn't so blue


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Comments:

Oooh Emo. I liked it. Again very simple very relateable, both reasons why I really like your work.

Posted: Dec 30, 2007

Author Comment:

thx i like urs a lot better than mine.

this is amazing!

Posted: Mar 24, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks for commenting.
Lydia_xxxx

Alicia branson
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very good, short but gets the message through. i liked it.

Posted: Jul 20, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you :D



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