Desolate
All i see is darkness
I have become so desolate
Sociaty doesn't see me...
Understand me
And neither do you
If you did i wouldn't be standing here crying
Wishing i wasn't so blue

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Submitted: Dec 30, 2007 Reads: 85 Comments: 3 Likes: 1
Desolate
All i see is darkness
I have become so desolate
Sociaty doesn't see me...
Understand me
And neither do you
If you did i wouldn't be standing here crying
Wishing i wasn't so blue
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Oooh Emo. I liked it. Again very simple very relateable, both reasons why I really like your work.
Posted: Dec 30, 2007
this is amazing!
Posted: Mar 24, 2008
very good, short but gets the message through. i liked it.
Posted: Jul 20, 2008
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