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Submitted: Jun 10, 2008    Reads: 38    Comments: 2    Likes: 0   


My vision is becoming blurry

The cold gentle heart ceases to beat

As the blood drains away from my body

My fate That I was destined to meet

For my life was already over

Before it was ever to begin

Each breath becoming more shallow than the last

My strength leaving my body as time pass

My soul departing from this miserable world

Towards the heavens a tortured the spirit rises

As her pain and misery is left behind

Life in her eyes defined as a dreadful trap

That she can only be freed from by sweet Death

The beautiful angel that takes my soul to eternal rest

Guiding my heart to peace and hope that life had kept away

As my dark spirit from my body is released

It is impossible to end what never began

And to take away something

That life never allowed you to receive

Now that a wondrous darkness overtakes me

As I breathe my last breath and my heart beats cease

I embrace sweet Death as my suicide

Takes away all the life that once existed


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Comments:

uh.....WOW!....what an insight to the deep dark depths of despair... I pray you don't feel this way, but the poem was great, as long as it's just a poem. :)

Posted: Jun 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Yea its just a poem. im not crazy or suicidal or nuthn. Im just good at writin depressin and sad poems about pain and any thing that goes with it. Thanks your comment in truly appreciated

Woe...this was amazing I dont know If i can say anything else about it it was just beautiful...an inspiration! I dont mean to be selfish but could you check out my work and tell me what you think? I question now that I have read yours!

Posted: Nov 7, 2008



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