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Bit of a Shock

Short Story By: Avril360
Young Adult


Tags: sad, death, happy, love, friends

Description: Young Cassandra is one of the prettiest girls in her middle school. Her best friend who happens to be a guy reveals his secret he has been hiding for many many years..... View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jun 4, 2008    Reads: 42    Comments: 4    Likes: 1   


I started pacing back and forth. I was wondering what to do next.

     “Kyle, just told you he loved you, Cassie!” My best friend Olivia said to exclaimed.

     “I’m aware of what he said to me Liv, but I’m not sure if I love him back,” I mumbled. Kyle was one of the hottest guys in our grade, and he just told me he loved me? I couldn’t believe this. Kyle Barnes and me- Cassandra Bluestone- have been best friends since we could talk, and this came out of nowhere. I’m a senior in middle school (8th grade) and this is the first person to like me since 2nd grade, Julio McDonald, he creeped me out.

     “Cassie, Olivia, dinner!” my mom yelled from downstairs.

     “One second!” I yelled back. My brother, Lucas, is the most annoying, fat little 10 year old boy ever.

     “When mom says it’s time for dinner, it’s time for dinner!” Lucas screamed as he entered my room, neither knocking nor coming in with permission.

     “Go away booger, I said one second!” I screamed back.

     “You’re so unlucky. Well at least you’re not stressed over a bat mitzvah or anything,” Olivia reminded me.

     “Yeah, right,” I answered. We go off my bed, walked down the stairs and sat down at the dinner table. My annoying mother tried to make small talk with us.

     “So, you kids have fun at school today?” Theresa (my mother) asked. Olivia and I looked at each other, smiled and faced our plates again.

     “It was………. Productive, you could say,” I answered. Then, Olivia and I started laughing. Then I added “hey mom I was thinking of having a pool party in out pool in the backyard, okay? Great, I already invited Olivia, (of course), Kym, Lydia, Elliot (a girl), Asauna, Johnston, Abi, Cynthia and Megan. Everyone except Cynthia and Megan could come,” I explained. “My party is next Saturday and it’s also a sleepover okay?” And before Theresa could answer Olivia and I left the table and ran up to my room. I ran for the phone, dialed Kyle’s cell phone number. Somebody picked up.

     “Hello?” they asked.
     “Kyle?” I answered.

     “No, it’s Roy. Of course it’s Kyle. It’s Kyle’s cell phone,” he answered sarcastically.

     “Kyle, its Cassie, I love you too, but more like a brother. I think we should just stay friends,” and I hung up. The next day (Saturday) I went to Kyle’s house at 12:00 noon. When he opened the door and realized it was me he grabbed me shut the front door and held a knife in front of my throat. My back was up against his chest.

     “If I can’t have you, no body can,” Kyle said evilly.

     “Kyle, no! You don’t under-” and he slit my throat.

 
[Kyle’s point of view]
 

     I lay Cassie down on my living room floor and called 911. I said she was about to cut turkey when she came into the living room to ask me a question but the knife slipped and she cut her throat. When Olivia found out she was crying in my arms. I-Kyle Barnes- was now evil! Muah hahahahahahahaha!


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Comments:

OH MY! Was definetely not expecting THAT! Very... interesting :) I wonder what inspired you to write this one. lol. Good Job! :P

Posted: Jun 4, 2008

Author Comment:

thanxx soooo much.... i spent like 1 and a half hours writing it..

I love the story! I have some Middle School Drama stuff! Visit my page!

Posted: Jun 5, 2008

Author Comment:

okay... i'll visit you... glad you like the story... if you like this you should read about the movie "no one would tell" it' good

Hi, you left me a wee comment on my profile and I thought i'd come check you out.

I think the story is way too short, I felt no compassion for Cassie when kyle killed her, but then again, you did write it in 1h 30 mins.

If the idea was developed a bit more, would be a lot better, like I say, there is no sense of loss when Cassie is murdered, really there should be.

Posted: Jun 16, 2008

Author Comment:

i was rushed when i rode it little miss rude!!! say at least one good thing

Amber
(not registered user)

I had no clue that was going to happen.I was surprised!The story is toooooooooooooooooooooo short!AT the end I felt sorry for kyle because if he killed the one he loved they could of ended up of marrying each other and he messed it up.

Posted: Jun 18, 2008

Author Comment:

that is why it is called a SHORT STORY!!!!!!!!! i knoe



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