Kenyas a normal teenager so everybody thinks bt behind her bright smile and beautiful eyes lies a life of pain and great distress and sadness.why? because of the people that are closest to her...
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This is something that I hope I could make into a novel if enough people like it. Please give me your thoughts on this peice.
A silly story I wrote back when i was a freshman in high school that i just recently found again.
It's funny-- for a freshman. lol
But i do enjoy it. : )
It's very random. So be prepared for things that don't make sense at all.
In the movie 'Almost a Man', a young boy who wants so badly to become a man and stop getting treated like a boy buys a gun. He tries the gun out while plowing the fields on his bosses land and accidentally shoots his boss's horse. He gets yelled at by his boss and his family, and then runs away...
this is only a scene i wrote.
it took me a pretty good while(keep in mind about now its 6:40am and i've been up since 3 yesterday.)
i wanted to write a scene to see how people actually like it and would like to see where it goes.
tellme what you think and i'd love some criticism.
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Short Story
| Updated Jun 12, 2008
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Hi Everyone. Here I am with a short story based on MA's challenge. The title was "WHERE DID I SEE GOD TODAY?" and the word limit was 1800.The story completed with 1893 words excluding what happened after 10years (Addendum).
DO SHARE YOUR VIEWS AS TO 'WHERE DO YOU THINK GOD IS?"
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