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Any Last Words...

Short story By: PossiblyMine
Young adult

Tags: Love, Family, Death

This is my first story... ever. Just wanted to get some reviews and see weather or not I should keep writing. Thanks :)

**Contains some cursing** SORRY**

Submitted:Oct 27, 2012    Reads: 67    Comments: 8    Likes: 1   

It was a rainy day. My brother was downstairs with his girlfriend. Out of nowhere I hear screaming, doors slamming and the sound of an engine starting. I run and look out my window just in time to see my brother pull away in his beat up old chevy. I rush downstairs and run outside after him, but im to late. I sit outside in the rain, waiting and waiting for him to get home. 2 hours later, I finally go inside. My brother's girlfriend, Aubree, hands me a towel.

"What Happened?"

"I told him... I told him... I wanted to break up."

"What the hell! Why!?!"

" I met someone else!"

"Are you fucking serious!?! You were dating my brother, you shouldn't have met someone else!" I yell as i run upstairs to my room. I sit beside my window waiting for my brother to get home. My phone rings, instantly relief floods through me.

" Noah? Where are you?" Silence. "Noah?"

"Kait, take care of mom and dad. I love you."

I barely have time to say "I love you too Noah..." before i hear tires sqealing, horns honking, and screams. I break down and cry, beacause I know that is the last time I would ever hear my brothers voice.

Why Noah?


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