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Step Brother Or Boarding School...?

Short Story By: PrincessJo55
Young Adult


You decide which way Jen goes post in comment box!
i will write it in my next short story as Step Brother Or Boarding School...2?
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Submitted: Aug 30, 2008    Reads: 65    Comments: 1    Likes: 1   


“Honey just think your step mother would do exactly the same if it where you!” dad explained. “Don’t even mention her name!” I yelled back. “Young lady what is your problem with her?” he asked. “Because she is totally gonna ruin my life!” I explained. “How?” he wondered. “Arhhh I’m moving out!” I yelled. “Oh don’t be so stupid you wouldn’t dare!” he said. “Wanna bet?” I questioned. And with that I went to my room. This whole argument was about my stupid step brother moving in. And while he was moving in I was SO moving out! “Well if your gonna move out I’m not letting you move anywhere, your going to boarding school!” he laughed as he entered my room. “What!? Boarding school but, but I wont know anyone!” I Spoke. “Well then your gonna have to make a quick decision then aren’t you?” He smirked. With that I opened my ipod touch and called Carrie “Omigosh Carrie…” “Erm hi Jen look I carent talk to you I mean ewwww your going to boarding school ewww it might ruin my reputation If I talk to you!” “Carrie how do you no?” “Well things get around quick look I carent talk right now Erm bye yes bye!”

I couldn’t believe it! My best friend had just dumped me because I was going to boarding school right now this was one of the hardest decisions in my life. What should I do?


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Comments:

The idea is interesting, but you might want to post is as a novel or a book. That way you can add chapters and you don't have to make a new short story all the time. Also, you might want to check the spelling and outlining of your story. It has a very good potential, and making it a bit more readable would improve it loads!

Thanks for sharing :)
iMazed

Posted: Aug 30, 2008



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