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emily's boyfriend trouble

Short Story By: stars in the sky
Young Adult


Emily is being fought over by her best friend Ian and her boyfriend Antony. She has to choose from the boy she has known since she was a baby or the boy she has known since the year before. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jan 4, 2008    Reads: 260    Comments: 5    Likes: 2   


Emily was walking down the road to get some milk for her mum. She was thinking about how she and Antony had first met.

She and Ian were walking to the beach and were having a fake argument like always and they didn’t notice the boy who was watching Emily with such possessiveness even though they didn’t know each other yet. By the time Antony had introduced himself Emily was creeped out because he always appered around every corner and he would stare at her all the time.

 

She didn’t notice that Ian was watching her as she walked to the local shop if she had seen him she would have seen the love in his eyes and the bunch of flowers in his hands.

Ian was going for it. he was going to ask Emily to be his girlfriend. he just had to get rid of Antony.

 

when they finally became aware of each other they were on oposite ends of the street and Antony had just pulled up to take Emily out on a date to a fancy resterant. she shouted to Ian that she would spend all day tomorow with him and that he could choose where they were going.

chapter 2 will be posted as soon as i think it up


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emily
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i liked it but i want ts nexto know what happen

Posted: Jan 4, 2008

Author Comment:

thanxs.
i will do some more chapters as soon as i can think of some things to put down for emily and ian
thanxs for reading

hmmmm very interesting love situation. cant waitt to read more

Posted: Jan 4, 2008

Author Comment:

thanx
this is my first story so it might take some time. but i am planning to post some more today.
let me know what you think

hey hey!! It's really interesting, i can't wait to read more. Sometimes i was a bit confused, but i bet if i read more i will understand, and i'm generally just a very confused person, lol. Can't wait to read more!!

Posted: Jan 10, 2008

Author Comment:

thanx
i am going to put it up as a novel instead of a short story. that way you can read more

hunterkyrie
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Sounds like there will be a lot of drama. Very good so far. XD

Posted: Jan 13, 2008

Author Comment:

thanx
i am going to redo it and call it another name and it will be a novel called emily's choice. i'll let you know when i have started it

This is pretty good. If its in chapters why havent you put it in the novel section?
Then you would be able to add chapters to it and you could go from the 1st chapter to the next chapter.
Im not sure if that made sense but, I hope it did.
I was just wondering.
Write more soon =]

**mandy[massacre]**

Posted: Jan 16, 2008

Author Comment:

thanx
i am going to re-do it over again and it will be a novel and in chapters. if you have any surgestions then i will be glad to hear them



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