Is It Called "Sister Zone"?

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Science Fiction  |  House: Booksie Classic

girl and her love

Is It Called "Sister Zone" ?

It felt right even thou Daisy was standing in unknown city surrounded by strangers. Daisy had just moved to city for an internship. Her mind was focused on job but somewhere unconsciously she was searching for love. She got busy with her life, weeks passed like a flash. She became free one day and went on social media. An unknown person named Sonal kept messaging, poking her. She kept ignoring, but messages kept coming. She thought "what the hell" and accepted request. And so they started chatting. Bubbly girl that she was he started liking her and one day confessed his likes towards her. Since her mind was set on job, Daisy turned him down. Soft guy that he was didn't know how to handle it and became "Mr.Caring". He always had kind words for Daisy and Daisy felt hard to ignore him and hurt his feelings. What she didn't know was her heart was falling for him. At one point of time he said..." my friends say we make a good couple... Lets prove them right"; listening to which she was so happy that it looked like she had hanger in her mouth. And so the messages turned into calls, they spoke for hours together. There were twinkles in her smile. She shared her heart out with Sonal and felt so comfortable around him. She made herself strong and confessed her feelings to him and he was overwhelmed with happiness. It's said "happiness doesn't stay forever" An so there was a bad day ahead. Due to some work issue, Daisy was sad and broke. Sonal was partying with his friends when Daisy called. She kept speaking; he showed no interest nor came any consoling words from his mouth. She cried, he said he was busy and hung up. They had a big fight the next day. He said things, she said things, and arguments were on fire. She being matured one said "Oh honey, we could sort out our mistakes”. He became arrogant and answered "liking you was the one mistake I did ". Her heart sank. She said sorry and pleaded him. He being superficial replied we'll never be together, Daisy sister". She span out of control listening to the word "Sister ". Daisy fought back and asked him to watch his words, he justified saying that's how he sees her now, a sister. Her heart was broken into million pieces. He was never available to speak or text ever after. She cried and cried but never could come out of it. She kept wondering...can a person become "sister" from being "someone special"?


Submitted: April 30, 2016

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atlantic12

A warm story. Short, but captivating. I must say, the grammar was a bit hard to take at times:

"it looked like she had hanger in her mouth"

A little clean up and this could be a fresh and fully enjoyable short story.

Fri, June 10th, 2016 8:30pm

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