You are more than a Mother..

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

It is the supreme art of the teacher to awaken joy in creative expression and knowledge.
For me my Teachers are God..I feel jocund when I give respect to them. I feel blessed to have a wonderful inspiring teachers in my circle. I am like a wet cement, whatever falls on me makes an impression..
Thank you to my respected Sobha Teacher, Lata Mam,Aarti Mam,Dorothy Mam,Nandita be continued.....

The sun rose in the name for you,

A superior than a Mother is only a few.

This pen has a feeling a new,

On a banal student you left a deep hue....

Why I always say you are great?? ??

Cause I owe to your hard work that you create.

I salute your attitude, it is bait,

God could not be everywhere so he sent me a Teacher by fate.....

Happy Mother's Day from far away!!

As love has wings, it flies across the sea to say.

Passing seraphim alight with glee,

Yelling never will our relation flee.....

Submitted: May 07, 2016

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H. S. Joga

Really nice one...

Sat, May 7th, 2016 7:27pm

Randhir Kaur

Thank you Joga..

Sun, May 8th, 2016 4:28am


Very well written..superb..

Sun, May 8th, 2016 8:47am

Randhir Kaur

Thanks writttteee...

Sun, May 8th, 2016 8:53am


Very well written.. Loved it.

Sun, May 8th, 2016 9:24am

Randhir Kaur

Thank you pooja for your time..

Sun, May 8th, 2016 10:00am


I love this! Tysm for checking out my poetry, it really made my day seeing a new ( and first comment)! Keep up the great work!

Wed, May 18th, 2016 9:12pm

Randhir Kaur

My pleasure dear ilovecat..Thanks for the same.

Thu, May 19th, 2016 5:45am


Very well written with a nice calming voice showing great respect for mentors :)

Thu, May 19th, 2016 2:09pm

Randhir Kaur

Thanks Sia to have a glimpse.

Thu, May 19th, 2016 2:56pm

Randhir Kaur

Thank you DarkEntity for your kind words. Teacher's are the pillars of the society. According to me,they deserve more honor than our parents.
Stay connected.

Thu, May 19th, 2016 5:04pm

Rocky Valencia

Very very great poem! I enjoyed it very much much.

Thu, May 19th, 2016 11:50pm


This is really beautiful, you can tell the admiration you feel for your teacher. Really well done and keep up the good work :)

Fri, May 20th, 2016 12:11am

Randhir Kaur

Many Thanks Rocky...

Fri, May 20th, 2016 4:38am

Randhir Kaur

Thank you so much MyLoveAndI for the feedback. Peace to hear this. Stay tuned.

Fri, May 20th, 2016 4:41am

Randhir Kaur

Thank you so very much Aravind for your appreciation. It means a lot for me. Glad to hear.

Fri, May 20th, 2016 9:41am

Matt Johnson

This was a really good piece. I really enjoyed it and I look forward to reading your other work. Keep up the good job.

Fri, May 20th, 2016 4:22pm

Randhir Kaur

Sure Cagedbird ..Thank you. Stay in touch.

Fri, May 20th, 2016 5:33pm

HMD Brown

Wow, your teachers have left such an impression on you. This poem is brief, simple and beautiful. It's like a message one can use to write in greeting cards to paint a smile on a teacher's face. :)

Sat, May 21st, 2016 2:06am


Yes Brown..I have always noticed and respected my Teacher's hardwork. They are just outstanding. No words can ever describe their greatness.
Thank you for your kind words.

Sat, May 21st, 2016 5:24am

Randhir Kaur

O thank you honour to receive a positive feedback from you.. I respect your appreciation. Peace.

Thu, August 18th, 2016 6:47am

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