When I'm Ready, I'm Whole.

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Poem by: EmmelieSky

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Status: Finished | Genre: Poetry | House: Booksie Classic

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I thought about my need for somebody to love me, and had a realisation. As long as I don't know who I am, I'm not ready to be loved. The moment I'm whole, love will find me. This is for him.

Submitted: May 19, 2016

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When I’m ready, I want you to find me.

Step in to my world at the exact right moment.

When I’m ready, I want you to love me.

Show me what it means.

When I’m ready, I want you to hold me.

I don’t want to stand alone.

When I’m ready, I want you to find me.

In that moment I’m whole.

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Thu, February 9th, 2017 11:13am

Hi EmmelieSky,

Thanks for the comment relating to my Poem Wolves. I appreciate your Poem because it is honest, and it reminds me of life and the way it unfolds. Sometimes, when I'm ready, the other person isn't ready. Or I'm not ready, and the other person is ready. That turns into regret because I look back and think what could have been with former friends, etc.....Being a poet, artist, writer, musician, singer....there's a strong tendency to be reclusive and to keep others out of your experience.....life. Then, suddenly you want everyone.....speaking for myself only......to see your most recent work of are, writing, etc... because now you're ready to share....looking good almost good enough to publish.....you think. But, getting back to regrets of not being ready when the other is or the other way around, it becomes a human experience at that point of love, honesty, relationships.......takes work. Can be good, though. Again, thanks.