when helen comes

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Horror  |  House: Booksie Classic

If Beatra lives in the middle of nowhere, where does Helen live?

Chapter 1 (v.1) - The House

Submitted: May 19, 2016

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" Beatra."

"Beatra."

"Beatra."

"Beatra."

The low voice sounds soft and warming but scared, like a little girl calling for her mother. But instead, that voice was calling me.

" Beatra."

The little voice gets louder as I walk closer towards the house. The house is worn down and in pieces. The door is barely hanging on and the windows are broken. 

" Beatra." 

I walk closer and closer until I'm finally at the hanging door. Inside are burned pieces of wood and ashes everywhere. It looks as if the house was burnt down.

" Beatra." 

The voice is no longer a whisper. It is a cry for help. A cry for me.

" Beatra."

" Beatra."

And suddenly the voice is saying other words.

" Beatra, I won't harm you."

" Beatra, come closer."

" Beatra, come inside."

"Beatra, I'm your friend."

"Beatra, I love you."

"Beatra, come to me."

"Beatra, help me."

"Beatra, I need you."

"Beatra!"

The voice is too close and too friendly. I walk inside the house, stepping over the door. 


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