Surrounded By Love

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic
I wrote this, in 2016. It's part of my 5th poem set, Emptiness Condensed.

Submitted: June 10, 2016

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Submitted: June 10, 2016

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The more, you, open, up, the more, closed, off, you, can become.

If you aren't, accompanied, by, those, that are, willing to, show, compassion, and comfort.

You, can feel, confused, and hated, when, you, long, to be, surrounded, by, love.

If only, we, could show, each other, as, much, love, while, we're, alive, compared to, when, we, die, then, lives, could be, different.

We should be, more, concerned, about, dealing, with, regret, than, showing, generosity, or gratitude.

To live, and, to love, we could be, more, fiercely, grasping, and encompassing, both, of, these, wild, attributes.


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